Bars and Rainbows Forever - My Thoughts · 12:44pm Sep 18th, 2016
It is the first ever story I decided to write after reading and listening to the read-out series, Rocket to Insanity. I took it upon myself to write a sequel, inspired from the other sequels from Dontwaketheneighbor.
I simply have one thing to say about it:
Oh, my god, it's AWFUL!
My writing skills at the time = CRINGE!!!
My plot = CRINGE!!!
Characterization = WAY off!
Gore = I'm a psychopath!
Rushed? = Yeah! No doubt there, Captain Obvious!
Could have been better? = Yes! Of course! My story sucks! The low ranking speaks for itself!
Can I believe people like it? = No, I can't. Why you'd read it with all the cringe-yness it comes with, I have not the slightest clue. If it's what you want...