What's happening? · 3:53am Sep 2nd, 2016
Okay I want to say this.
What is it with people just pushing the dislike button on my stories without even looking at it? Is it out of spite or something?
I see the view count doesn't go up and they keep doing it.
If you're going to dislike it fine , but read the story first, because I worked hard on these stories, I mean is my story really that bad?
Well hello Antmix762 I'm Darkironpony. I noticed your thread in the Looking for Editors group and I decided to look at your story. I came to your profile and noticed this blog of yours so I figured I'd comment here. As for your stories I didn't get past the descriptions. Before you say anything know that I didn't do this out of spite.
Your descriptions are overflowing with various grammatical errors. This makes it difficult to read just those small sections and actually absorb what is happening. A description acts as a first impression and these ones are not good.
Is it out of spite? No. It is just nobody wants to read a story and feel like they have to edit the story themselves to actually understand what is happening in the story.
To be blunt I doubt your stories are good. While there are grammar errors I could understand you overlooked things like the run on sentences things like the bit with "in" instead of "on" scream to me that there you were just too lazy to look over it. That's what your descriptions scream to me.
Now I want to be clear. I'm not saying you should give up writing. What I am saying is you need to hone your grammar skills or you're just gonna have your stories constantly downvoted like they are now. All those downvotes you EARNED. Use those downvotes as motivation to improve your grammar skills. That is what I think you HAVE to do if you expect a more positive than negative reception.
4189002 REALLY? You just looked at my description and then didn't read the rest?