Ever have a problem like mine?

Okay, so yeah... I need some advice. As anyone who's been reading the story so far knows, the building up to both Scootaloo's and Sweetie Belle's ultimate confession of love has reached it's peak, and it's pretty obvious that'll happen in the next chapter over the romantic dinner set up by Diamond, Silver and Apple Bloom.

Now here's where the... er... awkward part comes in for me. I just can't figure out how this should go or play out. I've never written a confession of undying love before from two parties, or at least done it well. The closest I came to that was in Giving it a try, and even then it was only somewhat of a one sided confession from Moondancer.

Listen guys, I really need your advice on this. Any suggestions please?

Comments

[The Bricklayer]

4147057 No need, I figured it out and just released the chapter.

[Solaris Rin Ursa]

4147062 lol ya i saw...

sorry about that. but gl and it looks really good so far.

[Casey23]

Include the word moist that makes everything better

[The Bricklayer]

4148760 Yeah, sorry but I've already released the chapter this blog post was for but I'll be sure to keep your suggestion in mind, man!