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Jul
28th
2016

Wanna read "Daring Do and the Secret of the Fourth Wall" chapter 10 early? · 6:21pm Jul 28th, 2016

...and you DON'T even need to spellcheck, or anything! :pinkiegasp: :pinkiehappy:


Just PM me with your email so I can invite you on Google Docs (*).

Then - just read the text! :rainbowdetermined2:



...What's the catch? :trixieshiftright:

Well, after you read the story, I'll ask you a few questions.

I just want to make sure everything I wrote "works out" the way I intended it. :pinkiesmile:


Also, there's a surprise! :derpytongue2: :pinkiehappy:

...And in case it's been so long you don't even remember half of the story anymore... I'm working on a "highlight real" for ch1-9. :twilightblush:

(*) Well, maybe it's best if I only "let in" one or two readers at a time ;
That way, if I need to change anything, I can send the revised version to the next willing reader to see what their initial reaction is.


ALSO! Did I mention I finished my revision of chapters 1 - 3?
And that those were the only chapters that needed revisions? No?

Well, I did, and now you know! :trollestia:
(Still need to update the audiobook links, though.)

Except those still do need proof-reading for grammar and stuff. Anybody up for that? Mostly need someone to check over chapter 2 & 3 for a quick grammar-check.

Revision of chapter 1 - 3 on Google Docs
I already updated the chapters on fimfiction too, but Google Docs is easier for correcting things.


I wanna submit this story to Equestria Daily for realz this time! :rainbowdetermined2::twilightsheepish:

. . .

AH DON'T HIT ME WITH STICKS PLEASE :twilightoops:

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Ah, I'm a bit busy at the moment, I'm afraid, but I'm quite pleased to hear that it's going so well! Good luck.

I am way super late to this. Would you still like any assistance? Should I send you a PM?

4194316 You are literally 4 days too late. :twilightblush:

I already found someone who already did what I needed. :derpyderp1:

If, for some reason I realize I still need someone else to read over it again, you'll be the first on my contact-list, though. :twilightsheepish:

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