Sep
9th
2012
PRE-READERS PLEASE HELP · 5:15pm Sep 9th, 2012
I'm looking for people to comb through OPT and rip it apart. I need spelling screw ups, typos, repeated words,, things that don't make sense, unnecessary details, lacking details, anything you can possible find that would improve if I were to fix it. Look here and comments #39 and #41 for what has already been reviewed, and jump off from there. I am not yet done with fixing the issues from the list, however.
Now I know most of you guys aren't going to respond, but it's worth a try. Just please leave a comment or PM with a specific issue. Idealy, I would love one or two offers to be an in depth, no-stone-unturned reviewer/prereader.
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boredhooman · 278 views
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>repeated words,, things
Two commas
347804
See, that was a test. Yeah. Making sure, uh, someone can spot those things.
*cough*
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I'll help you!
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Thanks.
Alright, you read the linked criticisms? I would like more of that. Line-by-line, any thoughts or concerns, cases of telling rather than showing, what you are getting about the characters/events*. When you're done just make a thing on GDocs or PM me or something. I would rather not use up the comments section.
*I really want to know this so I better understand what message I'm putting out allowing me to better adjust it to tell what I want to tell.