Sometimes the best qualities are the ones that go unnoticed.
I'm working on a story/animation idea about a criminal who ends up killing a little girl during one of his jobs and is then haunted by her spirit every night. I'm thinking the title should be from a nursery rhyme, but I can't think of a good one.
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When the bough breaks?
I dunno, tis too early on a Saturday.
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I wanna say Ring around the Rosie....
3979330 The original words were "A-ring, a-ring-o' roses."
"Ashes to Ashes" (also from that one) was my main idea right now.
3979464 Sounds good...Like her name would be Rosie xD. But yea it is creepy enough if you think about it.
3979551 What part of it is creepy?
3979602 How would she die?
3980680 Quick and efficient gunshot.
3980927 Yikes
3981359 She was in the way.
3981371 *Slowly backs away*
3981399 He didn't expect her to be there when he started the job, but when she interrupted him mid-heist, he killed her. Every night afterwards, she haunts him in his dreams, playing with him and putting him through a tortuous obstacle course made of nightmares. Every time he falls asleep, he has to try to run the gauntlet and make it to the door at the end. He progressively makes it further each night, but whenever he dies, he snaps awake. On the last night, he makes it through the door just to see it repeat. He didn't snap awake.
3981602 So creepy.
3982851 Exactly. Each time he snaps awake, it always zooms out to show his eyes closed before he jolts awake. On the last night, it zooms out, but his eyes remain closed. As it keeps zooming out, eventually you can see the girl's ghost floating above him.
There's also a journal where he writes an update each morning. "Sept. 8th, 07:00 - The nightmare is occurring more frequently." Etc. But after the final night, in crayon, with doodles everywhere, it says "Dear Diary, I think I broke him."
3983214 Sounds like creepypasta things.
3983799 Like creepypasta, but without the spam part.
3983964 Xd
3985461 Just an internet horror story, but even that's pushing it.