Update: May 21st, 2016

So, I decided to something a little different for the second half of Act I. Instead of seeing events from the point of view of the Guardian, it's going to been seen through the eyes of Celestia. There will be times where the perspective is someone else, but this is one of the major times.

This half will be longer, more polished, the pacing will be better, and will be darker. Not to mention the end of this act will reveal how they became princesses. The next acts are as follows:
Act II: Harmony
Act III: Twilight
Act IV: Chaos
Act V: Royalty
Act VI: Time
Final Act: Cursed

This story will be long. Although, I do plan on a sequel, depending on how I choose to end the story.

Comments

[tallestbrony]

Is this the story you were talking about? I'm assuming it is, so I'm going to give it a read.

Brony on!