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OroKinAu


Who am I? A 43 year old history teach living a double life as a brony fanfic writer.

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  • 102 weeks
    BLOG XXV

    It has been a while.

    I have a lot of abandoned drafts I want to work on, so look forward to new updates.

    Also, please look forward to a possible dedicated Discord channel if you want to hang out or talk or something lol.

    Sorry for the absence.

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  • 380 weeks
    BLOG XXIV

    A new semester has started, and with it, a lot of work. I hope to continue writing and publishing new stories on here, I just don't know when I'll ever find the time to do so.

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  • 415 weeks
    BLOG XXIII

    I'm planning on writing some side-stories to the "Mask One Wears", do you want me to add these stories to the fanfic itself, or just make a new fanfic just for the side-stories? What do you think?

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  • 418 weeks
    BLOG XXII

    Writing Stories

    What society thinks I do:

    What my friends think I do:

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  • 419 weeks
    BLOG XXI (Wild One)

    Wilderness Mistress....

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May
13th
2016

BLOG XXIII · 3:09pm May 13th, 2016

I'm planning on writing some side-stories to the "Mask One Wears", do you want me to add these stories to the fanfic itself, or just make a new fanfic just for the side-stories? What do you think?

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Comments ( 2 )

I think you should make a new fanfic

Considering how much of a let down the last chapter was compared to an overall great story, for what I can guess was a rush in trying to tie all the loures ends to finish it. It was a shame because I feel that there could have been a lot more aspect of the story that could have been expanded upon, which just felt on a flat note. What was interesting about it was that it covered an interesting grey moral area that the protsgonist is very difficult to justify his position but we see manage to feel sympathy for him.

If their was to be a side story to this I would love to see how fluttershy has treated for her condition and how the town full a Pedo's function if this is regulated by the princess.

So yes I would like to see more of this story

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