Possible Rewrite · 12:03pm Apr 27th, 2016
Hey, guys. MLP Fangirl here. I have some things I need to talk about.
I was going on over I Found Love: Discord and Twilight, and I began to realize that Discord was out of character in, like half of the story.
Discord is not serious, Discord does not get worried. Even about love. He'd hide his feelings and act like his usual carefree self. Also, certain chapters aren't sitting well with me anymore.
So, I ask you, would you like me to do a complete rewrite on I Found Love?
I'm probably going to post several chapters at a time. It'll be the same for the most part, only with a much better Discord.
Tell me what you think.
And, to tide you over if you want a rewrite, I've got another Twicord mini-story almost ready for publishing.
What's it about, you ask?
Well, you'll have to wait and see. Look for it when it comes out.
OH. MY. FAUST.
Do you even know how happy I was when I saw your post? Answer is;
Yeah, yes, I think it is a very good idea. Not because it is a bad story, something just... feels off. I said that in my comment, I think?
i don't know how are you going to do this, but, good luck. Rewriting isn't easy, I know it from experience (for me at least... maybe I am stupid?)
BEHOLD! A LOT OF MY THOUGHTS!
And, my advice - cancel that book, and do something to that room. Anti-harmonic chamber is - hm, good? It's tolerable, maybe even more, I guess. The book solves every problem, and/or is written like you did, this room for all of Mane 6... to be honest, I read... 3-4 lines from these two? Less? Leave that Discordy room alone for example? Well, I don't like this. but I you do, well... You are the one who is an author, I am a reader. I only want to help, and give some ideas.
Yes, I think changes in Discord from your story are very welcome. But be careful, Discord shouldn't be such badass I've seen in a few stories here. (and you can add more moments like that one from the ending of the "Amazing Discovery", about Twilight's soft fur. I find them most adorable, and realistic. And that dream.
. I know it by my 
, you know?
Also, they (Twi 'n' Dissy I mean) seem so... no offense, pathetic. You wrote about "taking things slow" but... I won't lie, WE WANT TO READ SOME GOOD AND CUTE ONES! Too much from it isn't a good thing, but lack of it... in with tag "Romance" is worse one. I think, it comes from my observation.
And... sleeping Twi in Discord's arms is cute. Or f***ing adorable.
Well... bored to death? For sure
you may not agree with these ideas. As I said - just my thoughts! You asked for it. If you want to discuss some, feel free to write. Or maybe they are helpful?
Oh, and soory about errors. You know my situation. (I think?)
If you think the story needs to be reset then go for it. I look forward to seeing the story again.
3900027 Yeah, I've got a lot to rewrite. I'm definitely going to get rid of the book. And, the antiharmonic chamber. It's really quite pointless. I'll figure out something else to draw Twi and Discord close.
3900427 When are you going to write? Or you thought ti wait for our opinions, so haven't planned this yet?
What's on your mind? only wanna help. I love helping people with writing stories
AND WHAT ABOUT SHORT STORY YOU METIONED, HUH? HUH?!
3900805 Ah ah ah, you'll have to wait and see. I'm just finishing up the last chapter, so it should be out before the week ends. If not, definitely next week.
And as for when, I'll probably start soon. I want to get it done, and I promise that the updates will be more frequent this time around.
3900822 Definetly. Not. Funny. But, if you say it will be here till next week's end~
How long is it? How many words? Only that!
I can wait
I actually liked you're story how it is
It is good sometimes when a person in your story isn't like how other shows and or stories portray him or her
It means you are putting a unique or hidden twist to that character that no pony else thought of!
That actually doesn't mean that they are out of character but that you are adding to it
We barely see discord as a mane focus in the show
But we know that when he is alone he lets out his feelings like crazy
And he is prone to let out his feelings as well in public which is why we as an audience can tell or interpret what he feels
3901526 Well, thanks. But, as I said, some chapters aren't sitting well with me anymore. I hate to have to rewrite it, but I just feel like I can do better.