Getting better enough to return to writing! · 2:33pm Apr 13th, 2016
Wrote something for A New Niche for a Princess. It's been a while, hasn't it?
Her sister’s warm nuzzle sent her heart into a tailspin. “I know… you always try to forgive me for having this irrational fear of you.” Celestia’s eyes widened, and her heart sped up to eleven. What she just implied meant more than a week of avoidance. “I-I do not… mean to be like this, Luna. I am not afraid because you specifically but what I did to you has kept me from being myself.”
There. She said it. Finally the words that she wanted to say for so long had escaped her mouth. They fluttered in the room and into the ears of her dear sister, who had been quiet the entire time she rambled about her feelings. And yet the silence continued. All Celestia could hear were a bird’s loud chirping, the winds low gust, and the trees dancing to nature’s own tune.
But those noises were tuned out by the low hum from her sister, the pony that meant the most to her. This brought new thoughts into Celestia’s mind. What was Luna thinking? Was she trying to decipher what to say? Was she going to say that her feelings were nonsense, or irrational thoughts that need to be dismissed before they created a rift longer than just a twelve hour period? Celestia feared the worst, her mind imagining that the distance would grow between night and day; a permanent winter stationed in sorrow.
Just some practice for this huge project I'm writing. Hoping it'll turn out well.
... i'm sorry, are you writing a clop story?
Ahem... on the topic on hand, it's good to see you finally feeling like writing, as we can clearly see, you seem to be keeping yourself busy with practice before the real story.
Practice makes procrastination! Or something like that.
Glad to hear you're getting better, and hopefully that project will turn out really well.
3867518
No not clop, just an intense scene. It's a story within a story, where the scenes in the main story effect the story written by Celestia. So yeah, this scene effects both the main and the story within it (both not clop).
3867549
I really hope so too. I may have a preview link to the first chapter so people can view it and see what they think, but that's a long ways away. I think I'll be posting this story when I've written up to chapter ten (and proofread).
3867667
Sounds like a plan.