I appreciate criticism! · 11:33pm Apr 12th, 2016
Don't feel bad if you get a mean comment in your head about my story! I want to be able to get stronger, you will think I get mad but no! You, the reader makes the story! I do not, unless if you have no ideas and you just want me to continue the story, I'm fine with making the ideas, but I would rather you do it so you will not be left out! I do not follow the train everyone else is on, it's not another human in equestria romance story, it's a story of humans in equestria, what the hell do I do now? So I'm kinda just getting through the introductions and all, so do not expect the first few chapters to be sunshines and rainbows. I promise the story will be great just patience will be required, and if you are willing to bear with me then it means you're the kind of reader I want on my story!
Take your time mate, no need to rush. I'll go ahead and review your story and let you know what I think.
Atlas said he would assist if you need help .. Just drop a Pm and he will get back to you
3866583 Great! I just revised the whole first chapter
I quite literally feel like my tiny little brain is going to explode.