About The Fluttershy Effect · 9:27am Mar 30th, 2016
Well where to start. I was actually surprised with how this turned out. In issue #1, I honestly didn't think people would care too much about characterization, as they would most likely just want to read the sex. So with this, I tried to involve more romance, gradual build up, and have a decent setting.
Fluttershy was difficult to write, as she's pretty much the last character you'd expect to have any form of sexual contact, but I feel like I made it work. I tried to keep to her shy mannerisms, while still giving her an excuse to come out of her shell, even if it was only for one night.
Ya, Nikky has a backstory now, that I'll be slowly adding in pieces of. He's no longer Mr.Perfect, and has only just recently become a confident role model. You start to see a bit of his intellect as he talks to Fluttershy about a problem she's having with her bf. Also you start to see Nikky as less of a lustful monster, and more of a human being, who craves intimacy and respects boundaries.
I also tried to extend the actual sex positions, so they're not changing left and right. Although it's difficult to specify they're still in the same position without using the exact terms over and over, so that was a real challenge as well.
I tried to keep the setting easily understandable, without everything taking place in one room. So even though they're at Nikky's house, they go out side on the patio, beyond the fence, the tool shed, and finally the bedroom. Also instead of announcing a new story, I tried to just heavily imply it.
As for the actual sex, ya I went a bit out of my norm here, but i don't want to post too many spoilers. I decided it was time to watch the female do her thing as well, instead of it all being male dominated sex.
