OBIASR - Update 001 - So fresh it might be stolen · 9:19am Mar 15th, 2016
I don't want to sound rude, but I think that I just saw a suspicious individual when I reached home.
He was black (African ethnicity), face hidden by his dark blue hooded sweatshirt and looking at me with questionable intent.
As any good computer science student that I am, I shrugged it off and considered the action as someone lost in deep thoughts. I thought that this male just liked the way I looked : mysterious, pleasant, with a well defined body.
I thought that this human only envied me, because of how attractive I looked.
Never in my life would I consider myself to be so wrong.
When I considered getting his attention, I was immediately surprised to see that he too, tried to do the same.
At this point, numerous questions arose in my mind : 'am I in danger?', 'was this man waiting for the perfect opportunity to act?', 'how should I asses the situation if this person is indeed, of no good will?'.
Slowly, I approached the face hidden man, hiding off any visible weakness that could be used against my being.
The other man in the other hand, seemed to tense up as we got closer to one another.
I braced myself for the highly possible outcome. If this man truly wanted me harm, than I should prepare myself to retaliate. It would not be wise to be caught unsuspecting the dangers surrounding me at another point in time.
When we met face to face, he slowly reached for his hood using his left hand. I knew that this was the moment, the time to put to use my untrained techniques on Tai-Kwon-Do.
Upon revealing his face however, my jaw fell so hard that I could have sworn I heard my joints and mouth muscles detach themselves with a sickening sound.
I saw the face of the hooded sweatshirt man...
And that man, was facing himself in the mirror.
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What were you expecting?
This is just a test on how to keep the suspense in a story.
The upper story's character is none other than myself.
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Also, for my upcoming story I now have :
1x Proofreader : Assassinmaker
1x Pre-reader : EpicBrony Astral
I'm still in search for Proofreaders, editors, pre-readers, etc. I'm all accepting to have your help and support.