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Dark-Aii


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  • 332 weeks
    Jobless for the new year

    Hello there everyone,

    You might not know this, but I've been quite busy with my job as a web developer for more than a year.
    I've come around reading FiM stories on my way to work during the morning, and night (on train, and public transports).

    However, starting next year, that will all change.

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  • 343 weeks
    OBIASR - Update 005 - Is postponed from now on

    Eeyup. I started out with around four(4) chapters of this story.
    Then I realised that on the side, I really wanted to change a few things about the main focus of characters.
    Specifically for Dinky and Ditzy Doo.

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  • 407 weeks
    OBIASR - Update 004 - Time and Time Again...

    :trixieshiftleft: Before you read this Blog, please let this wonderful soundtrack play along : CLIC HERE.

    Well, as a computer science student, I have an obligation to provide certain results.

    - Website creation project
    - Game creation project
    - Mobile application creation project

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  • 414 weeks
    OBIASR - Update 003 - Still waiting...

    So, I've submitted a story on Friday the 20th 2016, at around 01h15... GMT +1.

    I am writing this blog at 15h40, and nothing has been done as of yet. :fluttershbad:
    I'm still waiting for this story to be approved by a staff of FimFiction.net... :trixieshiftleft:

    It is quite frustrating, because I intend to keep my schedule in check :

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  • 415 weeks
    OBIASR - Update 002 - Still In Progress

    I know what you might be thinking...
    "You are too slow!"
    "When is the actual story going to be published?"

    And to answer you with the most respect that I have accumulated over the course of my life, well then, Indeed.
    This story will come around as soon as things are done. And by 'things', I mean my actual plans.

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Mar
15th
2016

OBIASR - Update 001 - So fresh it might be stolen · 9:19am Mar 15th, 2016

I don't want to sound rude, but I think that I just saw a suspicious individual when I reached home.

He was black (African ethnicity), face hidden by his dark blue hooded sweatshirt and looking at me with questionable intent.

As any good computer science student that I am, I shrugged it off and considered the action as someone lost in deep thoughts. I thought that this male just liked the way I looked : mysterious, pleasant, with a well defined body.
I thought that this human only envied me, because of how attractive I looked.

Never in my life would I consider myself to be so wrong.

When I considered getting his attention, I was immediately surprised to see that he too, tried to do the same.
At this point, numerous questions arose in my mind : 'am I in danger?', 'was this man waiting for the perfect opportunity to act?', 'how should I asses the situation if this person is indeed, of no good will?'.

Slowly, I approached the face hidden man, hiding off any visible weakness that could be used against my being.
The other man in the other hand, seemed to tense up as we got closer to one another.

I braced myself for the highly possible outcome. If this man truly wanted me harm, than I should prepare myself to retaliate. It would not be wise to be caught unsuspecting the dangers surrounding me at another point in time.

When we met face to face, he slowly reached for his hood using his left hand. I knew that this was the moment, the time to put to use my untrained techniques on Tai-Kwon-Do.

Upon revealing his face however, my jaw fell so hard that I could have sworn I heard my joints and mouth muscles detach themselves with a sickening sound.

I saw the face of the hooded sweatshirt man...

And that man, was facing himself in the mirror.

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What were you expecting?
This is just a test on how to keep the suspense in a story.
The upper story's character is none other than myself.

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Also, for my upcoming story I now have :
1x Proofreader : Assassinmaker
1x Pre-reader : EpicBrony Astral

I'm still in search for Proofreaders, editors, pre-readers, etc. I'm all accepting to have your help and support.

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