The 2nd Human Update #2 · 9:31am Mar 8th, 2016
Okay, updates!
Prologue: Re-worded to sound more like Hunter.
Chapter 1: Sage's dialogue was changed so she sounds less like a Rarity clone.
Chapter 2: Being worked on. Hopefully will finish before the weekend.
Chapters 3-5 will be the last combined chapters. I'm going to start releasing the chapters around 3K words in length. And I'm going to try to do this weekly, though not until after this week, most likely.
Sorry for the major changes, everyone. But on the bright side, at least I won't have to worry about comments getting deleted anymore (it was seriously beginning to bum me out).
That's all, ya'll!
-Ru