The Equestrian Event - Update

So... Turns out there were a lot of things that I rushed a bit too fast. Such as not being able to understand that every other piece of dialogue contained punctuation errors. Or that there was too much frigin exposition that could ruin other opportunities later in the story. Or that my original plot may have come dangerously close to plagiarism without me even being aware of it.

In short, I've started over. The first few chapters have seen some revisions and no longer contain amateur author notes. I will be uploading finished chapters as I deem them acceptable, and not try to rush my schedule again. The result was almost four months of being stuck on the same sentence.

Any notes or behind the scenes content will now be posted in my blog, for those who like that sort of thing. I've picked up some good tips on writing, but there could be a slight chance for inconsistency in storytelling. I'll try to limit this though.

Anyways, have fun reading this original semi-crossover. As always, your critique is welcome.

See you next time fellow horse trash readers!