Kingdom Hearts: Castle Mane-ia Update 1 · 10:46pm Feb 12th, 2016
I had recently finished the Prologue, but I'm still less than 200 words short before I can publish it. I tried publishing it anyway, but it wouldn't let me, since I'm still short on the word count, so apologies if I don't get this fic or my Hearts and Hooves Day fic out in time
Have a good day and stay brony, my friends
It's okay, take your time to finish it Golden.
yeah dont rush i ready other stuff to keep me buesy while im waiting for your stories
"It's alright, Golden. Just go ahead and just take your time to get your story done; besides, I bet it's gonna be good....."
I might have a few ideas to help make it longer (depending on what you have written already):
1. Sora and co. reporting to Yen Sid about well "Princess Twilight Sparkle" (in a nutshell). And him telling Sora to help Twilight look into the chest; as possibly part of his Keyblade Re-test.
2. While walking to the castle, Sora asks Twilight about the "Castle of the Two Sisters" and it's history. Twilight, of course, gives it based on her knowledge (from studies AND from her vision in PTS.)
Oh... also, one idea for this story is to have Sora, Donald, Goofy be separated from each other. NOT because they have a fight or anything like that. It's like this:
Sora: accompanies Twilight and Spike to the castle.
Donald: decides what Rainbow and AJ were doing from something they were doing off-screen. Eventfully, becomes (un-willy) involve in their contest as a ref.
Goofy; was ask by Rarity to accompany her and Fluttershy to the castle for her "project".
Why this idea? Two reasons:
1. Them seeing the Equestria is more peaceful than the other worlds that they been to that they feel that can "relax" a bit. Heck, you even have Sora make a comment about this to himself.
2. This... I'll save when the ending is ready to be written out.
Your thoughts?