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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Thursday
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 1 week
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 2 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Nov
24th
2015

Unleash The Magic - Teaser · 4:02am Nov 24th, 2015

I've written about 4000 words for my new Equestria Girls one-shot clopfic so far. Took me a while to figure out exactly how it was going to go, but I now know. Without giving anything away, what you're going to see is me completely cutting lose in my erotic writing, which I can't really do in my main stories. People tell me I'm shameless for some of the stories I write and characters I ship? Well, you're going to see what happens when I really am shameless--when I really do Unleash The Magic.

...Which just happens to be the working title of my new Equestria Girls: Friendship Games one-shot. So be afraid, folks. Be very afraid. :pinkiegasp: What follows is the story prologue/intro, subject to change at my whim:


I am Sunset Shimmer.

Former unicorn mare turned human, ex-student of Princess Celestia herself. I’ve been on this planet for six years now, and though my physical appearance is now that of an eighteen-year old teenage human girl, I was once a pony…

And, I just learned, in many ways still am deep down. A week ago were the Friendship Games between CHS and Crystal Prep High, and the certain… incident that occurred at the end. It was another, far different magical confrontation between me and Twilight--or excuse me, Midnight Sparkle.

Everybody from both schools saw it… and yet they didn’t. They just recall Twilight transforming and tearing open portals to Equestria, and the subsequent battle between me and her following my transformation using the same magical collection device she did. They don’t remember what else happened in and around all that, and that’s how I’m going to keep it. The last of my magic that day was used to wipe memories of those watching, both to protect Twilight and those she…

Well. To you who may read this, regardless of how you may have gotten your hands on it, know that I’m only writing it for myself, because it feels like if I don’t tell the full story of what happened that day, I’m going to burst. Nobody else recalls. Nobody else remembers anything except me. You may question my decision, and believe me you’re not the only one. I still remember all my magical ethics classes back in Equestria, even if I didn’t exactly intend to obey them back then, and what I did is something ponies have gone to prison for. If I forcibly wiped memories in Equestria, losing my place as the Celestia's star pupil would be the least of my worries.

And for that, all I can ask is… just what else was I supposed to do?

I blame myself for a lot of it. It should never have come to the point it did and I should have intervened a lot sooner. Twilight’s device was sucking up magic left and right, draining the element bearers and worse, the portal itself of their power. I should count myself fortunate that my new friends recovered their magic quickly, just by being themselves, or I’d never been able to draw on them for my own transformation...

Or else I’d never have been able to stop Twilight and set things right before the damage to individual psyches and boundaries between the worlds was beyond repair.

I have to take a deep breath before going on. The memories of what happened still… affect me. Twilight--human Twilight, I mean--is my friend now, and yet I can’t look at her without remembering what she became, what she did… and in the end, what we did. The magic affected me too in ways that still haunt me. So if someone does find this someday, all I can say is this:

Read on at your peril, and be ready for a tale that would make the most jaded hentai fan blush.


Sorry to leave off with the barest of teasers, but as much as possible I want what happens to be a surprise. When it will be ready? Next week, most likely. Still a lot of work to do, and of course the Thanksgiving holiday will interfere with things. I'm actually on a road trip right now, writing this from a hotel room at the halfway point of my 800-mile journey. So if I don't talk to you folks by then, have a good Turkey Day (Thanksgiving for my American readers) and I'll try to give everyone something to be thankful for later. :ajsmug:

Comments ( 22 )

I am thankful in advance for Sunset fun times.

You know, just reading that intro... I am somewhat terrified right now...:twilightoops:

So if someone does find this someday, all I can say is this:
Read on at your peril, and be ready for a tale that would make the most jaded hentai fan blush.

I have read Sh******o in its entirety; there ain't nothin' I ain't already seen that'll break me... I mean, Twilight still has her life, limbs, and organs intact, so that must mean something, right?

Read on at your peril, and be ready for a tale that would make the most jaded hentai fan blush.

Are you appealing to my man pride to read this story despite not liking humanized? I ask because... it's working.

I'm giggling with nervouscitement.

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I live to serve! Me, I'm just thankful for Sunset...

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You should be. :ajsmug:

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Thanks! Hard to do much work on it right now with the holiday and travel, but I'm trying to sneak a little work here and there. You will definitely see it as soon as I have a draft ready.

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Well, it's not gore or anything, but it is going to venture into at least some slightly dark territory...

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I dare you! Probably not your thing, though. Your thing is coming later...

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You and me both!

3569093 Ah, so it's just elements of non-con, then? That shouldn't be too bad, then.

3569093 Yeah now you're making me terrified right now... :twilightoops:

3569339 You can't possibly let a little thing like sex bother you after braving the wasteland.


3569107 He won't write rape... ever. Questionable consent? Hell, I'll write that! That said, from what little I know about the story, not being a proofreader this time, we'll see some riding of the line you probably won't find in an AJA-brand product.

3569579 Of course, that's what I meant by elements of non-con instead of straight-up non-con. In the end, though, I'm certain it's yuri-tastic, so I've got no complaints.

3569579 Oh it's not the sex that bothers me, it's how he's being about it that terrifies me :twilightsheepish: And yeah, I gotten into reading more Fo:E sidefics such as Oasis, Outlaws, Wasteland Economics, Infinite Potential, you name it, a lot of them recently :yay:

3570301 I'm going to read through vanilla FoE one last time next year and leave comments on it. There will be much to say.

3571528 Hehe, well that all depends on which Fo:E sidefic yo're reading...

3569339 3570301

I'm making you terrified? Good. Muhahahahwaha! :rainbowlaugh:But seriously, what is there to worry about? This isn't FoE. I'm not having Midnight Sparkle killing or otherwise reduce the world to a radioactive wasteland, just giving her an additional but appropriate... edge. And who will feel that edge? Oh, just those classmates who wronged, bullied, or put her down in the course of the movie...

Why yes, that is a long list... :raritywink:

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You think correctly. :rainbowwild:

3572311 ...I suddenly want to read more Fo:E sidefics now just to get away from you mister Firesight... you are officially reaching creepy town :pinkiecrazy:

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Well I think I've accomplished something if I've sent a reader seeking refuge in FoE of all places! :pinkiegasp: Seriously though, I'm not trying to be creepy, just tease. There's nothing that says you have to read this, you know. The new story is basically about me cutting loose in my erotic writing like I said. I'm not making any bones about what it's going to be about. Yes I'm excited for it. It's something I've kind of been wanting to do for a while where I don't really have to worry about continuity or character development, just write some straight-up clop and enjoy doing it. It's a change of pace I need and hopefully others will enjoy. I hope it will be a hot story that cracks the featured list and bring some additional readers back to my other stories as well. Certainly it's subject matter would seem to be something that would garner interest!

3572681 Well the way you are acting right now gives me some creepy vibes... suddenly I'm thinking of this character right now...

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Mifa: Why am I being involved in a topic not related to me in anyway possible Prince?

I don't know Mifa, you just are...

3572215 Not a sidefic, the main one by Kkat.

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I don't know who that character is, but I promise I'm not going for creepy here. So I'll just stop now. Read the story or not when it comes out, the choice is yours. There will be an announcement when it does, probably in a week or so. I may throw up an additional teaser beforehand as well.

I'm sorry if I came across badly. :ajsleepy: I'm just excited for something so very different than my usual stuff. The usual stuff will not be neglected afterwards, this just feels like something I need to do.

3574162 Ey no worries mate, I've bene through a lot of creepy stuff and yours is not that creepy. I'll be gladly awaiting your story... :twilightsmile:

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