Nyx and the Nightmare Discussion · 1:36am Oct 22nd, 2015
Hello Welcome to my Blog about my Fic Nyx and the Nightmare, as I said I wish to discuss the story with you that read it.
First off I know its my first fic so I don't expect good results 19 green thumbs to 33 red thumbs, it doesn't bother me, but I still want to ask "How can I change your minds?"
1) should go back to some earlier chapters and revise them? (given that I scattered the link to this blog though out the story at intervals, please be specific, ya know chapter 1 2 3 ect, I only use names to keep track easier for everyone.)
2) you could give some advice on how to improve my Writing (I am new to this whole fan fiction writing thing)
3) If any of you have any subjections for this story by all means speak up, I'm all ears.
What do you think, I would love to hear your opinions on this. For future reference of course.
(current chapter/chapters discussion, this will change)Next chapters will be the aftermath of all this, flashbacks for the skipped weeks with Nyx and Twilight and myself get a little pay back.
You should go back and revise the chapters.
3489409 Thank you now where getting somewhere, which ones To be specific? I kinda scattered the blog link thought my story so...
3489571 all 12 of them. Make sure to get things like dropping the "k" in "know" or adding letters.
3489645 Thank you, that is how you spell "know" that is lower case if you cant tell, adding letters I think I know what you mean but feel free to elaborate.
3489665 that, substitution of letters, misplacement of letters, and misplaced spaces are the most common and noticeable errors.
3489672 Well Joey I should have gotten all of it (If not then I got most of it) if you do find anything make a list and PM me in the future thank you.
The day of the final battle, Moon looks into the Crystal Heart and it now show her severely injured.
As a final battle, i suggest Nyx, Moon, and the Crystal Empire versus Nightmare and Crystal Umbrum.
Moon is very seriously injured collapses in the exact way the crystal heart shows.
3514256 right just for the record on that one...there will be fight in the empire yes, but Moon and Nyx will still have the whole baby be born and themselves to resolve, this is a lot longer then I tought it would be. Yet I like it.
3514828 are you using these?
3514922 using what?
3515921 the ideas
3515922 considering using them yes. I welcome them.
3515925 some people might want to see what the whole newspaper said.
3517616 Good idea I'll get on that, also I'll be doing a quick bonus chapter given I kinda skimped over the mane 6, i might go and add a bit to that chapter as well
Maybe after Garble and co. threaten Nyx's friends and the crystal empire, Nyx transforms into Nightmare Nyx and says "As Nightmare Nyx, I was bad at ruling" She materializes a sword from magic and says "Protecting others is one of the things I am good at and that is what my cutie mark means"
3539063 ya know what SURE, I like that,
by the way I decided to take subjestions for the rest of this story after the empire battle is over, I'll give some details about each chapter in the previous one and give it few days sound good?
Roller Reel interviews Bright Eyes, Chestnut, Diamond Tiara, J.J, Lord Solaris Moloch, Moon, Nyx, Prince Shining Armor, Professor Dubious, Queen Antumbra, Radiant Hope, Sombra, Spell Nexus, Spike, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, the Elements, and the Princesses.
3544271 ambitious but.....no sorry, maybe a few of them though