Re-edit, for more pleasurable reading. · 4:47pm Oct 1st, 2015
I made a re-editing on the story "This is bad!" since it did need a little bit of work shown to me in a comment by Princess Cadence.
If anyone of you who have yet to read the story or are about to re-read it I would highly appreciate it if you guys reported anything you notice as out of place or wrong.
The re-editing was as a whole a minor one and wouldn't change much of what you remember of it if you've read it before... unless you have a mind for detail. In which case I'm disappointed I didn't get any feedback about all my errors from you.