Title Change · 3:45pm Sep 26th, 2015
So the way "On Hiatus" is turning out, the title no longer fits. Blasted plot twists! (Yes, believe it or not I have actually been working on it.) As most of you probably know, it's an HiE fic based in my thestral universe. I am now in dire need of suggestions for a new title, so here's a brief summary. BE WARNED. SPOILERS WITHIN.
For this new story, I have created a human character worthy of representing the author of the thestral universe stories. (She's me but not me.) She is transported not just to any Equestria, but HER Equestria, and gets to meet her characters as well as the Mane Six. You'd think this would all be sunshine and rainbows, right? WRONG. She has a good time at first, but soon comes to the realization that it's not all it's chalked up to be.
Essentially I'm looking for a nice, catchy title that describes the relationship between the human and her OC's and/or the letdown of Equestria not meeting her expectations.
Suggestions are welcome, and due credit will be awarded to whoever comes up with the best title.
Thanks to all, and know that the first TWO chapters will be published soon after I get a new title. (Let's see if bribery works )
I came up with a few. Things after the colons are not part of the title just definitions in case you need it.
- Dismayed: very upset, disappointed, or annoyed about something surprising or shocking that has happened
- Disenchanted: disappointed and no longer enthusiastic about someone or something
- Bitter Wind
I might do some more later but I just woke up.
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Well, I left this alone for a while in hopes of new suggestions, but looks like this is it.
Thats okay, though. I really like your suggestion, "Disenchanted." That fits the story so well, and sounds incredibly mysterious. I love it!!! Thanks so much, jaceblackfire!
Okay, I'll get around to actually publishing this soon... after I edit/rewrite the first chapter for the thousandth time.
3462584 Ohh... ya, sorry I kinda forgot about that.
I think you tagged the wrong story