This story is a sequel to The Seventh Element
EDIT! This series is now open universe! You want to make a spinoff version? You totally can! You want to self insert yourself into their shenanigans? You can do that too! The characters and story are now completely public domain. I've lost interest in the series but if for some reason you actually like it enough to write your own take on it, you're more than welcome to! I'd love to read them, so feel free to link back and please remember to credit me/the story as the source!
Thestrals have returned to Equestria, but some still aren't willing to accept them. Meanwhile, Acrylic prepares to begin a new life with Torchwood. They'll face hardships, discover dangerous secrets, and begin the most terrifying quest of all- starting a family. Follow her on a journey of self discovery as she finds out what it really means to be a thestral.
NOTE: Stops following the series at Season 4.
Why no comments?
Alright I'm all caught up now and I wish I wasn't, it's so difficult to just wait for the next chapter.
Anyway this story and its prequel are great. Not only are they great, but they dare approach the big nono's of MLP fanfics (mainly an extra element) and it seems almost natural. I like the head-cannon as well, you know with all the workings of forgotten species and their abilities, it's awesome.
There is however one thing that bothers me, and it's not really a problem. I find it odd that both Acrylic and her sister have dragon companions, sure Acrylics story of how that came to be makes sense. But the coincidence of her sister also knowing a dragon around the same age is just to much to swallow for me, an 'easy' fix would be to explain how they got to know each other.
YES! SEQUAL!
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You'll have to talk to my sister about that. It's her OC, so it's not really my story to tell. Maybe one of these days I'll convince her to start publishing her stuff.
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Yeah please try to convince her, I would try to myself but I don't know her.
Maybe you could ease her into publishing by making a collab with her?
I EZ HAPPY!
YAY BUT I WANT NEXT CHAPTER NOW
This fic and the last deserves way more attention than it gets. Keep up the great work!
DAM CLIFHANGERS THEY RUIN MY DAY
Great Story Keep It Up.
wow, still only likes keep it up!
Green, Orange and White wedding. I approve.
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Dammit, Dash. This is why I hate ESFPs. (though tvtropes says she's more ESTP)
But then, she called out Lightning Dust, so there's hope for her yet.
Why the hell do the threstals have to be "registered?"
Voting districts and taxation census? Screw that!
sometimes less comments mean better story. that makes this a very good story.
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The Princess of The Trestrals has returned.... i think
OMG! OMG! OMG!
No! Not the chest! Think of the poor libbrary that is doomed to be destroyed now.
during all of that why didn;t they have Spike send a letter to Celestia asking about the ruins and if this is what she was looking for?
In think, I have to say Celestia is an idiot. Wait till you have EVERYTHING together before sending one letter.
5243714 he has a point. why could't Twilight move into a restored Two Sisters?
and Applejack and Rarity. I knew those two were pranking.
IAnd i guess because Essence drew power from the tree they couldn't just remove the Elements when done. sigh.
It created an insatiable lust for love in Topaz. I'm calling it now. HI Chrysalis
5272064 good logic behind that idea but you'd think that if she survived then the other destrals did but maybe not in the form you are thinking of....
hint hint changlings
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If that is the case then how did the wings change?
5274693 How did Luna turn into Nightmare Moon? Magic
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Good point, but the change in wings isn't just from species to species, it's from kingdom to kingdom.
5275218 I don't know but I will not be surprised if I'm right
I like the universe you've made for this; it's an excellent example of making so many things work together while still forming a good story.
I'm glad I passed over the plagiarized version (something felt off when I saw it – maybe that it looked like FiM but with seven ponies due to the description and cover art – though it was nine months ago); I doubt I'd have seen a sequel otherwise.
dam it theres my prediction out the window
ANYWHO keep up the good work
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Indeed
Pretty good.
Yay for Glimmer. Is she going to play a bigger part in this story now?
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okay, what's going on between Acryilic and Twilight?
And i'm betting our thestral is pregnant
When will the next chapter be coming out? will it remain constant with the last interval?
5350681 you and me both
5350681 Yeah, I am calling that she is.
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I'll third that notion
Man how are y'all catching such a subtle hint? Had to reread it 3 times to catch it.
PREDICTION COMFIRMED YAY MY PREDICTION IS MOST LIKELY RIGHT
possible spoiler if the prediction right
that acryilic is pregnant. well 90% sure she is anyway
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Twilight sorta revealed that in the last chapter
Trixy and Glitter, now there's a show
hoping to hear more from them.
Ah, I was going to say. I was wondering when the kids in the cover would come in.