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Lunaexcelsior


The true beauty of our life and our existence can be explained by the starry night sky. For the stars know the truth of beauty, which is that much stronger once it's paired with its dark background

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  • 356 weeks
    To whom it may concern 2: an explanation of my recent absence from the site and plans for the future

    So, as some of you may have noticed I haven't been very active on this site as of late. In fact my page has been so dead that when I came back I was kind of taken aback by the changes on the site. Heck, I have even missed a majority of this new season of MLP.

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  • 398 weeks
    I am back baby!

    Yes, after a lengthy time period I am finally back to this site. Of course, I never left it truly, but I have been largely inactive due to some personal issues. However, those issues have been resolved for now and I can finally dedicate some time for this wonderful site. I do hope to finally complete the Darkrim story that has been on the backburner for a while now and begin a new secret project

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  • 416 weeks
    So, I just watched A Heart's Warming Tail

    Major spoilers for the new episode(well it's not new technically, but whatever)! Proceed with caution!


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  • 416 weeks
    My thoughts on critics and critcism

    Well, this has been a long time coming. Now, before you say anything, yes I know there are a lot of users that have already discussed the 'issues' of criticism, but I think this is a topic that bares repeating, since it is one of the most important steps in growing as an author. Learning to accept critcism and learn from it can easily turn an awful author into an actual decent writer. However,

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  • 423 weeks
    Hear yee hear yee!

    As some of you may have noticed, I have not been quite active on this site as of late. This is, unfortunately, due to my highly busy college schedule. My classes start very early and end late, so I barely have time to even rest. Because of this, I have set my latest installment of Battle for Tartarus (yes that's the official name of these fanfics now)saga (Darkrim and the Elements of Harmony)

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Aug
22nd
2015

A poem for my stories · 2:36pm Aug 22nd, 2015

As some of you know, I have been writing my little epic including my OC Darkrim and the events surrounding him. Well, I wanted to make a poem to serve as an overall plot to his endeavors. This poem contains spoiler for my upcoming fics, so SPOILER WARNING. Enjoy! :twilightsmile:

From the ashes of the fallen, rises a new shadow Golem.
A creature that will set them free
Conceived by Nightmare philosophy.

With his hypnotic gaze
He will make ponies crawl.
Under his golden spikes
The Diarchy will fall.

The hive mind respects his call.
He promises the unity to all
If they would just give in.
A piece of their individuality
The consumation has begun
Where Ares left he will run

Their efforts are all in vain
For soon the Nightmares will prevail.
As they fight for a false goal
They shall be consumed all.

By the darkest hour has come
Only the Elements can right the wrong.
Bring peace to this fallen land
Restore the balance so we can withstand

In this the darkest hour
We shall not cower!
Instead we shall face them head on
And usher in a new dawn.

The blessings of the Royal Sisters
Guided with Tartarus' wisdom
Will finally bring the Nightmares to their end.

Once the world seems nearly fallen
And all hope is good and gone
We shall rise once more
And we will fight until we come undone.

And once the drums of war die down
And the sun sets below the skies crown
Harmony shall be restored
And peace will rule, once more.

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Comments ( 3 )

This poem is awesome. You are a really good writer.

3353431 Thank you so much :twilightsmile: I try as much as I can lol :pinkiehappy:

3353493
I once wrote a song/poem for Nightmare Moon.

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