Chapter 4 redo · 10:40pm Aug 20th, 2015
Ok I decided to re-track chapter 4 and give it an overhaul. I don't how long that will take so be patient. I want you the reader to be as happy with the ending as I am. I still want shining to become Metamorphosis I just need to find a better way of doing it.
you can always make the story longer, as in more chapters. ya know maybe a little more of shining being a changeling, perhaps shining runs into a few changelings witch end up telling him he's royal (or he figures that out by how they act around him). the reveal in a separate thing and maybe some reasons for him becoming metamorphosis. just my 2 cents.