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CoastBrumby


I am an aspiring author and bookstore owner living in NSW Australia.

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  • 384 weeks
    Promises

    :twilightsmile:I promise to get back to writing stories in the new year. I have been working on my novel, and distracted by many things. Next year will be better. :ajsmug:

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  • 409 weeks
    Hearthstone

    I am sorry. My story and life in general is being delayed due to Hearthstone addiction.:facehoof::moustache::fluttercry::ajsleepy:

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  • 418 weeks
    Distractions

    I know I need to put out the next chapter to my new story soon. I'm part of the way finished, but I have more to go. I am not sure how I want to finish the story as it is about Lord Tirek's past. I want to tell the story of how he acquired his hunger for power.

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  • 426 weeks
    Patience

    :moustache:I know you all are waiting for my next story.:ajsmug: I am writing a couple of stories now.:rainbowhuh: The one most likely to be published by me next is a crossover with characters from Magic The Gathering.:pinkiesmile: I am even crazy enough to attempt to create my own card block to go with it.:flutterrage: Spoiler alert.:raritywink: I plan to include a romantic subplot with Twilight

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  • 439 weeks
    Hopes

    I hope people read this.:twilightsheepish:I hope people like this.::pinkiesmile: This time I think I've got it.:ajsmug: This is the one that'll blow 'em all away.:rainbowdetermined2:

    That's how I imagine most authors feel when they post on this site.:raritystarry: But how high should an author set his or her sights? What is a reasonable response to excpect?

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Jul
29th
2015

Why no like? · 9:22am Jul 29th, 2015

I had a story posted on this site less than twenty four hours ago.:twilightblush: It was a story with a complex theme.:derpytongue2: Writing it was not easy.:ajsmug: When I looked at the site in the morning, I saw that fourteen people had viewed it, and two had not liked it.:pinkiegasp: The people who pushed the down like button did not bother to comment on why the felt my story was not good.:flutterrage: Was it the plot?:rainbowhuh: Was it the dry dialogue that has offended others?:rainbowderp: Was it the prose in general?:raritydespair:

I would like to know these things. :twilightoops:

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Comments ( 3 )

I'll answer your question with a plain and simple quote from your last blog post:

I would say I put a lot of effort into my story:ajsmug:, but I'm certain it isn't nearly as good as it could be.:pinkiegasp: You see, I did not get anyone to edit it for me before I submitted, and that's always a help.:coolphoto: Also, I feel I could have spent another month perfecting the dialoge and adding descriptive prose. I didn't write at all about how some of the characters smelled:fluttershyouch:, and I feel that was important. :rainbowhuh:

The thing is, 'Likes' and feedback is like a drug to me.:pinkiecrazy:, and I've been hankering for a hit.:rainbowwild: That's why I sacrificed quality for speed.:facehoof:

In the Immortal words of dolan duck, "qvestion wuz sefl ansewred."

You see, when you cut your drugs with low quality ingredients, it just doesn't give you the same high. :derpytongue2:

Beyond that, if I were to look past the obvious problems, the only issue I can really see is that you're shipping the Smooze with Maud. This isn't exactly a high profile ship. It's naturally going to be hard to get people interested in it.

No offense, but if you really want eyes on your story, stick to an idea that will appeal to many people, and don't sacrifice quality for speed.

3280286 I do have an Applejack story in mind that many would be interested in reading.
Thanks for the advice.

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If you need someone to do a once-over on your future stories and they aren't gore/dark/troll fics, feel free to put them in a gdoc and send me a link and I'll be happy to offer suggestions.
Good luck in the future!

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