Almost Ready! · 5:08am Jul 24th, 2012

Hello everyone! Well Chapter 2 of "You Brighten My Day" is finished. Now I just need to tweak it and give it a good edit for content errors and of course grammar and spelling. I doubt it will take too long. But I plan to read over it at least two or three times before posting it. There are a few areas I want to smooth over as well.

Oh and in case you may be wondering where this fic is heading well...I'm not going to spoil any of the plot, but I can tell you some things to expect. First off there will be some clop down the line, but worry not it will be tastefully done, just as I've done in some of my other fics (See "A Total Eclipse of Their Hearts" (Chapters 2, 3 & 8) and "Apple Bucking with a Beauty" for examples). I'm not planning on putting anything super kinky into this, so have no fears there. And I noticed that I've had a unique opportunity to compare technology and similarities between Earth and Equestria. So hopefully that will be another element that you will all find entertaining. Once you read chapter 2 you'll see what I'm talking about.

Oh and FYI chapter 2 has done just as I predicted. It's a little over 7,600 words. I had a feeling it was going to pass the 5,000-6,000 range. And I had to cut it off sooner than I originally planned to. It won't mess up anything, being cut-off where I ended it. Hopefully it will just make you all want to read on even more!

I'll make another post once the chapter is posted! It will most likely be sometime tomorrow afternoon, or early evening.

Take care! =D

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