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CoffeeRings

A reader... I read.. I love to read I also am Derpish. I have Derp and I am proud of being Derpy I also work on Blood Bound a non FIM webcomic thats NSFW and not

CoffeeRings Joined 22nd May, 2012 · Offline

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  • 337 weeks
    Uptate time!

    I have been writing its not dead~! I am considering putting what I am witing onto the chapter I have released.... or as a new chapter. Not sure yet. If I do. I will delete the last chapter and re-release it.
    if not new chapter.

    Oh and yes Quote time.

    POWER ARMOR DETECTED. STAND BY FOR CONNECTION AND AUTHORISATION.

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  • 348 weeks
    Working on it still

    Iam working on the story infact here for your pleasure is RAW unedited typing with all the spelling grammer and punctuation errors that my poor editors have to go though (not realy I do get most of them in re-writes)

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  • 355 weeks
    Update!!!

    Im still working on the chapter! I promice! Its been tricky for me to write with both home life, work life, and subject. But I am getting though it! I PROMISE!


    anyway have a snippit (with all spelling grammar and other errors intact!) (after the break for gore reasons)

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  • 365 weeks
    Rating change

    I have decided to change the rating for Hivemind from Teen to Mature. I have tried to keep the story somewhat sanitized to keep to the Teen rating but this story is not something I should do that too. Its not a pleasant place, and these characters are deeper than what the teen rating has put. I also put the sex tag on, not because I plan to have clop (I don't) but because there will be

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  • 390 weeks
    It is coming I promice

    This chapter has been taking FOREVER With parenting and working and not being able to write down things the way I see it in my head.... Its annoying. Esp since I have other chapters in my head I want to get onto!

    But I promise the next chapter IS underway.....

    Sneek Peek?

    OK

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May
30th
2015

Boring chapters? · 4:42am May 30th, 2015

I am a little worried with the chapter I have been writing, there's no action in it! no deaths no nothing, its like down time for the characters.... I know I know, they should be allowed some down time... but its so hard to write and make it interesting! GAHHHH Bring on the goons, slavers death and dismembership!

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Comments ( 5 )
Cascadejackal
Cascadejackal #1 · May 30th, 2015 · · ·
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Writing a boring chapter? Use it for character growth, backstory, world building, or setting up events.:derpytongue2:

Comment posted by knetch deleted May 30th, 2015
knetch
knetch #3 · May 30th, 2015 · · ·
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they are not boring just slow, but that is good as jackal here said they are for character development.

goddamnAnimal
goddamnAnimal #4 · May 30th, 2015 · · ·
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I thought the chapters were quite action packed. I honestly wouldn't mind some slower chapters especially if there was some good character development in them.

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