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Run, John, run, the law commands, but gives me neither feet nor hands; better news the Gospel brings, it bids me fly and gives me wings. ~John Bunyan

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  • 286 weeks
    Update and another author chat

    After a lot of hem and haw about how to do the next chapter, I am making some progress at last. Hoping to finish within the week, despite the Christmas holiday.

    Most of the delay on this was personal matters keeping me focused elsewhere. The rest of the delay I've been struggling with is due to the kind of stuff about to happen.

    It's going to get exciting quick.

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  • 297 weeks
    After much thought, I'm making a big change to Protecting Harmony

    I've been toying with the idea for ages, and never felt satisfied with where things are at now with the organization.

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  • 297 weeks
    A type of blog post I never expected to make

    Hey all.

    Someone I know recently lost their dad.

    Not much to say that you couldn't guess. I know their money is tight and they're already dealing with a high risk of going homeless soon.

    As I'm in a position to help, I'll personally be donating on top of this simple signal boost.

    If you have something to spare to help pay for final expenses, it would be appreciated.

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  • 347 weeks
    PHB2C6 now up

    Next chapter of Protecting Harmony: Rising Effort is up now. A little less than a month after the last one is a vast improvement, time-wise.

    Bright Spark gets to show off a few hints of herself, and the modus operandi of the Disciples. Also giving Vojin more shit. I'm starting to enjoy beating on him... :trollestia:

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  • 350 weeks
    Rising Effort C5 up

    Bloody took me longer than anticipated, as well as having to split the chapter in half because it went past 20k words. I draw a hard line on length there, so it worked out that I was able to break the chapter almost exactly in half. This is kind of why I so rarely say when a chapter will be coming. Of course, maybe setting myself some deadlines might be motivational now.

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May
20th
2015

Oh look! A shiny thing! · 5:29pm May 20th, 2015

So I've gone without posting a new chapter to Protecting Harmony for a while now. Yes, I know and it irks me that I keep having one delay or another come up. The majority of the delay was struggling to come up with something that felt right with Fancy Pants. I'm about as prissy and refined as an unmaintained adobe house after 20 years (huh, don't that make me sound lovely...), so trying to write in a manner which I think feels more refined and believable for him has proven a struggle.

Now I've gotten dragged into writing a three part story called Not A Dog that was burning in my brain and went to the top of the feature box the second day it went up and stayed there a couple days. I need to finish this so it doesn't keep tormenting me, but in regards to my adventuring epic this post is tied to, there is good news.

The process of writing Not A Dog has done wonders to teach me new ways of thinking about writing, new eyes to catch errors and see new opportunities to do something better than I had already. In essence, taking the time to work on that separate story has granted me a chance to step up my efforts with Protecting Harmony to new levels, and possibly even carry forward the surprising impact that Ch22: Make Us Proud came in with. Long term, this is going to be so much better than I would have otherwise done. Working on Not A Dog has also driven home the point of polishing more when I finish a chapter, then posting.

As for Ch23, it currently stands around 6400 words. Putting some of my new knowledge to good use, I am evaluating if I need to break it up a bit and turn it into two chapters due to some of the content potentially working better on it's own, instead of squeezed in because I thought a selection of snippets might have been insufficient for a chapter of their own. It's a bunch of short highlights of the week, both in and after the meetings of the Royal Summit each day. Some of it, namely the points that happened in the meeting, I think I'll leave, but the ones talking about events in the evenings are dynamic enough that I could grow what was prepared as mental musings into proper short tales as a separate chapter. This includes Vojin getting to chat with Spitfire, and also Cadence briefly teleporting off with Vojin because reasons (she's just too much fun).

That said, next chapter might be a month or two more, then I'll probably knock out two in quicker succession. One fun short scenes and one with ominousness before finally meeting with Fancy Pants. From there, it's one or two chapters and the first book is done. I have some big plans for those last two that, while initially not very attention catching, will set the stage from some major stuff later. To be a little teasing, cryptic, or annoying depending on opinion, one of those things might affect the squad that will be coming to help protect the Bearers. I've also got some thematic songs to several characters or the dynamics between them.

Protecting Harmony is very much in my mind, and two tabs for the story are perpetually open in my Gdocs (notes and next chapter). I will finish this sprawling tale, of that you can be certain. The journey has barely begun.

Also still wondering if anyone's going to figure out what the first attack was before the next one hits. And first attack is relative, depending on the character you're referencing, but it is there in the story. :trollestia:

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