May
6th
2015
First Story · 5:56pm May 6th, 2015
So, I've written and submitted my first story, and I've gotta say...It did better than I thought it would. Despite editing it at least three times, and still finding it a bit lacking in my opinion. But, I guess that's what always happens with your first story. Now, I know what to do better, so that the next chapter and any other story I might write is better.
By the way I'm basically Indy Ploying this story. Meaning I didn't plan out several chapter outlines like most sensible people do. The range of characters is the same and so is the basic jist of the story, but don't be surprised if I add in fetishes or If I don't add edit my story before I submit. I apologize in advance if you may not like the fetishes I might add in.
As long as you don't add watersports, diaper play,or (shudders)scat
we'll be fine
Oh and no random HiE or self insert
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Don't worry. I never understood the appeal of those fetishes and I HATE self-inserts. HIE is only acceptable in my eyes is if the humans were there to begin with-not from another dimension or some bullshit like that. They must also have a legitimate backstory and are integrated well into the story. It also helps if they can't really be classified as humans i.e. some humans are demigods, some have claws and fur etc.
3050160 oh yeah this is definitely a late response but for tips with Maud..you gave her too much emotion. She can think it but it never shows on her face
3050160 Heh, I'll be fine if there's more futa on male stuff.
I have an unhealthy obsession at this point.
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She is in heat so, her personality among other things are being taxed to the limit. Other than the small-unseen due to fur-blush, every emotion she shows is in her hallucinations/delusions. I'll try to make that more clear in the next chapter.
3050452 you and me both
3052477 oh ok but don't forget to add her blank stare fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2014/074/f/a/pinkie_and_maud_pie_hug_by_awokenarts-d7ablq5.png