Operation aurora update

First of I'd like to say thank-you to those who have messaged me about the story, I'm taking everything you all say into account.

Thank-you to Hnetu and Tetragrammaton for contacting me and giving me feedback I can't say how much I appreciate it.

For those of you who disliked the story I would like to hear why? This is so I can Improve the story as it goes on, if it is with the way I laid the story out or is it how the story is set etc... I can't improve unless I get feed back.

Same thing goes for those who liked the story please tell me why. I've made amendments to to chapter 1 as described by those who gave me bad review, as much as I like to improve on stuff and things, I also like to know what I've done correctly.

Time for the story update.

Chapter 2 is finished and is under the proof reading stage.
chapter 3 is still under construction (W.I.P)
Chapter 4 surprisingly it is finished seems a funny order to finish chapters in but you will understand eventually.
Chapter 5 exactly the same as chapter 4, its finished.
Chapter 6 has just been started.

Anyway for those of you who like the story I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing it.