Ember Gaze chapter 2 preview · 11:13pm May 3rd, 2015
This is something I've never done before, but I hope you like it.
Chapter 2:
Ponyville
Witch!!! Murderer!!! Monster!!! Murderer!!! Villain!!! Demon!!! Murderer!!! Murderer!!! Murderer!!!! The hideous voices chanted in unison.
No! She cried, Please, stop! She couldn't see anything other than the pitch black darkness. She couldn't move, either.
You killed him!!! You murdered him!!! It accused harshly.
Stop it!!! Please!!!
He died because of you!!! You murderous witch!!! Burn!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! She screamed in agony. She could feel her whole body burning.
Burn!!! Burn!!! BURN!!!! Rot in Tartarus, where you'll stay for all eteeerrrrnityyyyyyy!!!!! The voices cackled. As they did, she writhed in immense pain. She could now see their eyes glow in the darkness; red and harsh.
She couldn't see it, but she can feel the fire wreath around her. She could feel her eyes sting, and smell her mane scorch. She could not see herself. The odor of burning flesh filled her nostrils. The flames went inside her, and burned through her. Her internal organs were incinerating within her. As the pain intensified, so did her screams, and the voices cackling. Their cackles sounded like cawing crows, taunting her. Their eyes stared, and burned with deep hatred.
All the feeling she once had... has gone. The fire no longer hurt her. She could still smell the burning though. She heard something in the distance, but couldn't quite make out what it was. The cackling continued, still ringing in her ears. But after some time, she heard the same something she heard before. It almost sounded like a voice was calling her. The voices laughed and laughed, but their laughs fainted. She could almost make out what the voice was saying.
"Hey... wake..." The voice was faint.
That voice... she thought, Who could it be?
"Wake... Up..." She heard the voice call again. It was much clearer than before, and distinctly female.
The darkness around her disappeared, instead she witnessed a bright flash of... light.
