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I am the Autistic Writer. I have Autism (Aspergers Syndrome), but that doesn't stop me from writing great stories.

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  • 78 weeks
    Update November 12, 2022

    Hey Everyone,

    How have you been doing lately? I know it's been a long time since i've updated anything lately. I've just been hitting major depression lately. I understand that you want to know what's going with me. "Where are my stories? Will i ever update at all?

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  • 200 weeks
    Son of Eris on Fanfiction

    On April 12, 2014, i posted a story titled Groom of Eris on Fanfiction.

    Today 7/6/2020, i have posted the first chapter of it's sequel. Son of Eris. I hope you all enjoy it.

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13636649/1/Son-of-Eris

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  • 217 weeks
    ToonKritic Returns

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    Please Donate or Spread Awarness

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    Help Ryley Miller by either donating or spreading the word around

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  • 227 weeks
    Update #300

    I've lost track of how many updates i've made but as part of my new years resolution was to be more productive. So, my update chapters and new story will be on Sunday. Friday, you will receive the names of those projects on my Blog. (Fimfic only). I can't promise it will make things up, but i promise to deliver them in a timely matter.

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May
2nd
2015

MLP Reviews Season 5 Episode 6: Appleoosa's Most Wanted · 9:54pm May 2nd, 2015

Appleoosa, it's been so long. Rodeos on the otherhand, let's not get into that. Let's discuss Appleoosa's Most Wanted.

Season 5 Episode 6: Appleoosa's Most Wanted
I knew from the synopsis that this episode was going to deal with misunderstandings. Something about it didn't sit right with the whole CMC capturing an outlaw. I just thought the episode would be just like the Pokemon Mystery Dungeon series. Let's discuss the pros and cons.

What I Liked
I really enjoyed the Cutie Mark Crusaders in this episode. I feel most of the episode in Season 5 will revolve around them as much as Twilight and her friends trying to solve Friendship Problems or Troubles. I also liked Troubleshoes. They really hit it out of the ballpark with his character and how much i enjoyed his performance. Even though he was the MLP version of Eeyore (From Winnie the Pooh), i genuinely felt sorry for how he was treated. He just wanted to be apart of the rodeo, but his clumsiness was his own undoing. Much like a familiar Red Nosed Reindeer.

What I didn't like?
Unlike the last episode, i didn't have too many problems or things i didn't like. The only one nitpick i had was with Applejack, but that could be easily explained. Although, i didn't like the misunderstanding parts of the episode, but that doesn't mean it distracted me from my viewing.

Moral/Theme
Seeing the Cutie Mark Crusaders helping Troubleshoes overcome the problems with his Cutie Mark was really a great moral. Probably the current best moral expressed in season five. Probably will change if i see the other episodes, but we will see.

Character who shines the most: That's a tough call for this episode, but i think the character that shined the most was....Trouble Shoes. I am sorry, but this character was so expressive and so enjoyable that he was pretty much the spotlight of the episode. Am I the only person who wants to ship him with Derpy?

Character who shines the least: I think Braeburn didn't shine much in this episode. His character was just there to watch over the CMCs which, he failed at his job.

Me: Braeburn, you had one job.

Applejack would have been the one who didn't shine, but i understood her motivations in this episode.


Conclusion
I thought it was a MEH episode. It wasn't that bad, but it could have been a bit better.

Rating 7/10

Next episode.....

A Fluttercord episode? huh, looks like it takes place at a party or the Grand Galopping Gala. Looks like this brony needs to get his dancing hooves, a top hat and a date.

Until then, see you later.

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First off, thanks for reading my review and complimenting me on my reviewing skills:pinkiehappy: You're sweet kid, real sweet:raritywink: Haha gee, I wonder what fanfic reminds you of this new upcoming Fluttercord episode:trollestia::raritywink: Tehee! Anyway, great job on your review:heart: Oh my Luna you're right, Trouble Shoes is also like Rudolph the red nose reindeer!:raritystarry: Good job on the reference eye spy:rainbowdetermined2: Agreed, the moral was super great in thus episode and unfortunately Braeburn and AJ didn't get to shine in this episode.

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Yeah i know, it was a real bummer of them, but not all episode can't be perfect. I can't wait until next episode.

Oh I forgot to mention in my review of your view, HAHA LOL at your Braeburn joke:twilightsheepish: Yeah Braeburn, you had one job! One job! Also, bwhaha lol Trouble Shoes x Derpy ship:rainbowkiss: Good luck fighting off the Doctor Whooves x Derpu shippers:ajsmug:

Yeah, it came true :)

hmmmm, if that came true i wonder if my other idea will come true. >:) I shall finally ship the koifishpony with somepony. BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I am shocked you haven't made a story about your OC yet.

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Now that I think about their personalities more and see more cute pictures of Trouble Shoes and Derpy....I ship them:heart::derpytongue2: I'm convinced!:pinkiehappy: It's official, I support them and probably will write a shipping fix about them! Alright Doctow Whooves x Derpy shippers(I put a shield and a helmet on), give me your best shot.
Wait wait whoa! You're going to ship my OC?!:twilightoops: With who?! :twilightoops: Tell me!
I kinda did write a story for my OC may back for my Dr.Wolf fanfic. It was about my OC having a therapy moment with the famous brony analyst Dr.Wolf. How come you're so surprised that I don't write stories for my OC?

Well, i think it would be interesting since there aren't stories about Koifishponies. I mean seeing the Sirens looking part fish and part pony. Maybe you can do a story where a koi fish was mistaken for a pony. :)

Not sure yet about who to ship your OC with. Need to brainstorm more about it.

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That's true, there aren't surprisingly alot of stories about seaponies/mereponies. Hmmm. Maybe I'll write something about how Koi fish ponies came to be...in the future...we'll see.
But thanks for the story idea:twilightsmile:
Haha lol why do u want to ship my OC?:rainbowkiss:
Let me know who u want to ship my character with. Make sure you ship me with a guy character because I'm straight in real life. R u going to write a story on this?

Because i thought it would be interesting. No other reason other than curiosity.

Well, i thought of doing a one shot. Maybe as a blind date? Maybe an actual story could be possible in the future.

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Haha lol I like the blind date idea because I never do blind dates in real life:twilightsheepish: So the oneshot idea is perfect! Can't wait to read it:twilightsmile: Just let me know, before you publish it, who you're going to ship me with. I need to approve it first. Make sure to mention in the story that you don't own my OC, only I own my OC.
Are u thinking of shipping my character with an OC or a canon MLP character?

OC character, probably a unicorn with a secret of his own :)

Names will be changed. Probably name her Aqua or something to do with water.

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Hmmmm a unicorn OC stallion with a secret of his own...I'm intrigued:trollestia: Is it you? Is it your pony OC self? Or someone of your creation? Sorry, I have to ask.
No! Don't change her name to Aqua!:twilightangry2: Call her Missy!

OC that might be me :) you will find out when the story is up.

Sure? i would just need to know some personality.

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Oh:derpyderp1: Ummm, is this a joke fanfic you're writing about us? U don't have a crush on me, right?
Missy's personality is basically my personality. Read the fanfic about her moment with Dr.wolf on my Fanfiction account, that might give you more clues. The story will give you clues on what my OC actually looks like (it's different from my profile pic...slightly)
She's a positive, friendly, smart koi fish pony that loves to swim all day long, whether in a pond or in the ocean, she loves to be in water. She loves seaweed tea with honey, she like yoga and meditation, along with reading and telling ponies stories. She lives in the ponds and streams in Ponyville. She used to live in the Equestrain Asian countries of the land, particularly in the ponds in the high mountains. She loves animals, both on land and sea along with trying new things and new food.
Does this help?

Don't worry, i don't really have a crush on you. I am writing it out of respect for you. This does help alot :) thanks for understand and for helping me out with it.

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Phew! That's good. Not that you're not awesome and everything, I like you but as a friend. And I respect you as my friend, and I'm glad that you respect me too. Thank you for writing a fanfic about my OC, I'm really flattered. Sorry to point that crush question under your blog post.

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Oh, I forgot to mention that Miss Koi loves to sing.

Nah it's okay, i am sure people will ask me this question when i post the one-shot. I think i might post it on Fanfiction.net because i am not sure if the Fimfiction people will approve of this story.

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Yeah, they probably not approve because it's an OC. But at least try, you never know.

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