Stories Under Maintenance · 9:25pm Jul 13th, 2012
Phew, that one took forever! Ok, so before I start typing up the next chapters, I'm going to take the time to go backwards and edit all the chapters for both A Cog in the Machine and A Rare Scoot. Spelling and grammar are what I'm aiming to tighten up along with any obvious faults I can see, while also standardizing everything. That little line under Chapter 7's title? Going to add it for every chapter. Changing Griffin to Griffon, as that's how everypony else spells it apparently, and going to remove all underlining and replace with bolding instead, as it looks nicer when combined with italic. Also, should I keep calling Nathan De La Griffon's claws claws, or should I change that to talons and rewrite areas to compensate?
'He gripped my claws with his talons, our hearts beating as one...'
HAHAHA Nope, no children romance, sorry!
Anyways, take care all; I've got stories to tighten up and Seaponies to slay. Cheers!
EDIT: Oh! But don't worry, I'm not reconing anything or doing anything that would force you to re-read! Chapter 7 is also ok for reading as it doesn't need these edits! Feel free to enjoy!
Nice to know.
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Tho you should keep calling Nate's claws, claws.
It has a stronger effect (on me atleast
Can't wait for the next chapters in both stories.