I Got Another Review! ...And I don't remember asking for it. WHICH MAKES IT EVEN MORE SPECIAL!

So, I got a little review for A Game of Kings and Pretty Pony Princesses today straight out of the blue, and it made me so happy!

Then I read it.

I had to take a break while reading it.

Certainly, it is great to receive constructive criticism, but it can be a bit hard. But what he said was true.

One of the things he talked about was the huge amounts of CAPS LOCK I USED IN THE PROLOGUE. So I took another gander (the first time in two months). Boy, was he right.

I used A LOT of caps.

Not that kind of "Caps."

So I went back and got rid of them.

That was the easiest thing to fix. He brought up (I assume it's a he) more points that will take longer to fix.

I'll go back and make changes and improvements as I am able. Right now, though, I'm more focused on moving forward and progressing the story. (Especially since these last two weeks I have been pretty busy and haven't had a lot of time to dedicate to this.)

I have a few little surprises coming up soon, and I can't wait to share them with you!