• Member Since 1st May, 2012
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Captain Literal


i love writing and am very creative. im a cool guy, and am very energetic at times. can be very random

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  • 529 weeks
    Ahem... Well uh it appears I have been gone for a very very long time....

    Well hello my followers! Yes I know I've been gone a very very long time; but I'm back! With good news and bad news. The good news is I'm going to start up writing again. Yep The Captain is going to pick his pen, erm keyboard, up again to bring you whole new alternate universes and what not. The bad news however is I'm wiping my stories clean. That's right, I'm deleting all my stories. Why?

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  • 582 weeks
    I just realized how many watchers I have.

    It’s The Captain here! Yeah sorry things have been slow. Senior Project sure burns my time. Not to mention homework and all that jazz.

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  • 584 weeks
    Merry Singles awarene- erm- Valentin-erm- Hearts and Hooves Day!!

    Hiya my loving readers!

    Yes I am alive. It's take more than sickness, tons of projects and homework, and life to keep me down!
    Anyhoo sorry I was away. On the bright side I did get some writing done! My main thing I'm working on is PLSoM and the first chapter to FoE: Miracles.

    At any rate, Happy Valentines day! AKA Singles Awareness Day! AKA Hearts and Hooves Day!

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  • 590 weeks
    Seems I can't reply to comments...

    Yeah so my computer broke a while back (don't worry I can still update!) so I'm on my iPhone. At any rate does anyone know how to reply to comments? I can't seem to find the darn reply button.

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  • 592 weeks
    Why hasbro!?!

    NO! Why hasbro?!? Why take my Lightning!?! Well actually the only similarity that my Lightning and their Lightning Dust is that they share a similar name and a lightning bolt trail, but still... WHY!?!? Now my fallout equestria character's originality has been cut in half!

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Jul
10th
2012

ATTENTION ANYBRONY WHO CAN SEE THIS!! THIS IS IMPORTANT!! · 4:00am Jul 10th, 2012

Okay so here is the scoop. I have been doing some thinking, and I have come to decision: I am going to submit Princess Luna's School Of Magic to EQD and I will do whatever it takes to succeed (except cheat, plagiarize, ect). To do this, I need help. They say Friendship is magic, so I'm calling on all my friends, readers, and loyal supporters, every resource I can muster, to help revamp The fic. It is going to posses the same Characters, and story. But it will have no, I repeat, NO grammatical errors, the show and tell will considerably better, and it will be better overall in general. I know some of you are fans of my F.O.E fic, but I still ask your help.

This will not be easy. This will not be quick. This will take dedication, and hard work. But I will succeed. You will all individually receive recognition if you help. I will not forget this, and will be forever grateful if you assist me. I cannot do this alone. Friendship Is magic, so why don't we perform some magic?

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I'm not sure how much I can help...but what do you need?

223181 Editors, and people I can get opinions and suggestions from. Ill even take moral support. People I can consult with too. This story WILL be made 1,000 percent better.:rainbowdetermined2: I will be sinking as much time as I can into Fleshing it out, and improving show v tell. And incorperating writerly tools.

I can definitely help with the grammar & stuff.

I'll do whatever I can find time for. I'm best suited to editing, but of course, I have very little to give after my other projects, so it may take a while.

223212 Ill take what help I can, like I said before, I will succeed. And I won't soon forget any who choose to help.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png

223202Yeah I'll help however you need.

223224 it is muchly appreciated, How do you want to help?

223231I actually had some ideas.. Let me get some sleep I'll re-read it tomorrow and I'll send you a message on my thoughts in general if that's alright with you.

223246 I will accept the help, but be sure to keep in mind, that it is my story, and what happens is up to me. I will think about any suggestions made, but I will decide if they will be used or not. But it is still helpful to get suggestions, some of my best ideas come from seeing someone else's idea.

223267As is your right to turn down any suggestion. It is you story(one that I love) and I have no intention of changing that nor would I want to. I mean no offense and I'm sorry if it sounded like I wanted to high jack your story. I'll send you a message tomorrow, but right now I'm about to pass out from my twelve hour workday. Peace every pony.

223290 oh you didn't offend me. sorry if I came off strong, I just get that way when im in crazy determined mode. :rainbowdetermined2: and good night. I await your message.

I haven't read it yet. I will provide blistering levels of criticism, combined with layers of kindness and moral support, to create a jalapeno-and-chocolate monstrosity of CHANGE!!
And then you'll tell me I'm being weird, and take the stuff from it that's actually good.

It's how I help most of the people I help with stories.
And it works!

224131 I am glad that you decided to help, I will not forget this. Also to anybrony who can read this, Somber of F.O.E Project Horizons has given some help. He is a really cool guy, and an amazing writer. Without him I would have never made the fic in the first place.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png So be sure to give him support too, he in a tough spot in his life.

224208
yw! And i'll be sure to. Link to his page?

224232
All-right!
I'll go check it out.

Even though Capt. should know he already has my moral support, I'll post that he has it on here anyway. I can also help with editing or help with ideas, if he needs it.

I shall Pinkify this blog now!

230936 Sorry for doubting you buddy, ya forgive me?:twilightsheepish:

230939 It's fine, I forgive yah.

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