HapHazard reviewed my story Willowhisper's story

Link to review

I just wanted to share some personal thoughts about the story touched by the review:

He said it didn't go anywhere, and well...it didn't go any where because I didn't want it to: it was a part of the experience and the story. It wasn’t really ment to go anywhere. Same goes for the character: She wasn't ment to be opening up as you read and you'd get more depth to her.

It's an experimental piece that play with the definition of a good story and a bad one.

He also mentioned that you don't take away anything from the story because of that it doesn’t move. Exactly. It give the read nothing, yet it gave the reader something , because it gave nothing.

I'm also toying around with the idea for a sequel, from an other ponies POV.

Comments

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I thought it was the very good story

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