Fret has a question to her readers, and also rambles on about things off topic · 11:50pm Mar 7th, 2015
Warning: Since I'm writing this when I'm super tired, I ramble on about things that aren't at all related to the topic at hand. Just saying.
Okay, so before I begin, I would just like to point out that I am typing this on my phone while sitting on top of the stairs while my butt is aching because of the uncomfortable floor in my house at 10:40 pm while I would love to go and lie in my bed, but I cant because there is a spider in my room which I saw make a web from my ceiling into the floor, and so now I have no comfy bed to sleep on because I'm scared the spider is still on the floor or something :c
Also, I really want to go to sleep because I'm tired, so if my writing becomes less than decent English, you'll know why.
So, I have a question that's been on my mind for a while now. I'm just going to assume Tha whoever is reading this has read at least one of my stories, so I'm gonna go ahead and ask.
What do you find appealing on my writing?
I'm just curious. I do get quite a bit of feedback, but they're usually just about only one of my stories. I kinda wanna know what my overall style is... And if there's anything (which I know there is) that you feel is my weak point, share it, because I don't want to keep it in my writing. If I know what it is, I can get rid of it in time.
And no one mention the whole 'ould of' thing. I can tell you why I do that a lot. It was only about... what, four months ago? I was actually corrected by my teacher in school for the first time. As soon as she pointed out my mistake, my thoughts were just "OH FRICK NENH." Yeah... the early chapters of NENH suffered greatly from gramacal errors :c
ALSOOO, does anyone want to see anything from me in the future? I don't trust myself with exact prompts, since with every prompt I give myself, I end up changing it. You know that NENH was changed quite a lot as I wrote the chapters? So many things... :D
The only story I've written that followed it's prompt is I'm Not a Fan of Puppeteers... If you give me some characters to work with, or a Discord/Celestia prompt, I can try to make it work.
WHY AM I RAMBLING ON SO MUCH? This is what happens when I'm tired and I can't go to bed because there's a spider in my room :c
I was actually trying to keep myself awake... That's why I made this journal in the first place.
So now, I will type my reactions into my phone as I attempt to leap into my bed and hope the spider doesn't get me...
It's so helpful that the corridor light doesn't work. And I'm scared. Uuuugh
I still don't see it. And the pins and needles in my foot don't help.
FAAAAAA
I SHOULD HAVE USED THE HOOVER WHEN I COULD STILL SEE IT.
So making a fanfiction on this, btw. I'll probably make it about Celestia or Twilight.
So now I'm just standing idiotically outside my room on my phone typing out things.
I need to pee.
WHERE THE BUCK IS IT SERIOUSLY. ITS KILLING ME FFFFFFF
I only wanted to draw Celestia and Discord at the gala together... What did I do wrong? ;-;
Wooo I stepped in the room for the first time :D
"Spider... Show yourself!"
"Hahaha... Did you miss me, Fret? I've missed you :)..."
"NO I DIDNT NOW GET OUT OF MY ROOM LUNADAMMIT."
I actually opened the door this time
I went to pee first.
I'm in my room... Getting ready to sprint across and hide under my blanket...
I MADE IT YEEEEES
And so the journey ends... Now I suffocate under this blanket... There's no oxygen...
DAMN SPIDERS. So sorry that I rambled on. In just really tired... And it really stinks under this blanket :c
It's night at your side of the world? It's morning here.
2857934 Yep...
I'm still under the covers. I cant breath...
2857940 Well for your most popular story No Elements No Harmony. The writing style is that each chapter is a somewhat of a cliffhanger and also leads to a lot of world building in your story itself. It reminds me of Fallout Equestria in that sense.
2857948 I see
World building NENH may be my favourite part of writing it.
2857952 Also you have a great backstory for why the Mane 6 are the way they are in this world. I was especially shocked on what you wrote for pinkie pies backstory. That indeed left me stunned. And that's a good thing. Getting the readers attention.
2857956 I'm glad you liked Pinkie's back story... but in a couple of chapter's we'll be learning about a certain Queen's background
2859278 Well this should be interesting.