Mar
6th
2015
Holy Favorites. · 7:42am Mar 6th, 2015
Ok, I'm gonna be honest here. I never saw that coming . All those people favoring my story "Hooves of ice."? Nu-uh, never thought that would happen. But here I am, more motivated than ever to continue the story and please you all!
But having at least a few comments now and then wouldn't hurt either. Also, If I had as many likes as It had favorites? Then I think it might be able to reach the popular list. Huh, nevermind.
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But now I am getting off topic. I want to say Thank you!!!
I love you too...
I love you too...
And you can never be ready, but you deserve it.
You have few spelling-errors you can't look over, the plotline is interesting, and somebody said there was not enough character-interactions, but I disagree. You can write a great story about emotional problems, and it doesn't necessarily need characterinteraction. Sure, it's harder, but it is possible.
And Jack IS able to communicate... with books, so I guess it wouldn't be too hard to write the story basically him secretly helping or hindering the other characters.
~Stone Dark, Solarkness & Shipper
2854407 Now wait a bucking minute. Who in the name of Celestia said anything about poor Jack being alone this whole story? He has been alone for a great while but the reason I start the story now and not when he arrived in Equestria is because it's now that stuff will start to happen for real.
2854493 ...I just said Jack IS able to communicate, saying he doesn't have to be alone. And actually, I guessed he would be kind of a gamemaster placing hints, so my own guesses probably were indicated...
I am hyped for who will join him, will it be usual Guardians of the Light- people or natives or from other movies/games/books/other?
And with join him I mean who will communicate with him?
I always considered Nightmare Moon Pitch Blacks native-version.