The Story · 11:51pm Feb 26th, 2015
Well everyone who actually reads these, I've started on chapter one and will hopefully be finished with it in the next few days. I would like some suggestions if any at all for the story. I know where the chapter is going but every little thing helps. For anyone who wants to know a little more about the story well...
I'm changing quite a bit of it. Although I'm not changing enough of the story that it should be considered a different story all together. I'm changing Seth's age which I've already stated. I'll be adding more detail and I'll be changing his and Celestia's "lovey dovey" attitude. several people pointed that out. I knew about it but did nothing due to my inexperience with writing stuff like that. I'm confident that I'll do better this time around so don't worry... as much.
I'll also be messing around with the side characters. I might remove some and I might add some depending on what I want to do with the story, so it could be either way. I have a long mental list of things that I'm changing like Seth's inconsistent magic usage in the first chapter and later on. Anyway, I hoped that helped some people and if it didn't I'm sorry. I'll talk to you all when the next chapter comes out ;).
See ya
~~Timelord
