I should be working on my story. And yet, somehow I find myself in a chat-room hypnotising strangers. I'd never done it before, but apparently it went well...
My god time flies by, one second I'm promising that I'll have a story out next week and the next procrastination hits me with all the speed and subtlety of a bullet train on steroids. I really have to apoligise for that. Anyhow, I am now beginning work on the first chapter and to make up for the lateness, I am providing a snippet of the chapter, which you can find below. As for when I'll have it
Hello, I am proud to announce that I have begun work on the sequel to The Twilight Corruption. It will be called Twilight's Silent Conquest and I have already ironed out a basic plot. You should be expecting the first chapter next week.
Hi, just a quick blog post to say that I'm practicing for a largish project in the future, two hints, it'll contain mind control and is a sequel. As for the practice, it's just a description of a room, but I'll appreciate any feedback.
Hi, a quick story written on the Iphone, please, give me feedback in the comments.
It was a rainy, dull night as Twilight looked over the city, her dark and busy city, stood in front of her window in her luxurious penthouse. A lavish affair of purple leather and lavender walls, it was what you would expect of a business leader such as Twilight.
Twilight Corruption is done. My plans for the foreseeable future is to take a break and take Escape from the Nightmare off hiatus on the 16th of Feburary.
But maybe you should change the tag on it from "Incomplete" to "Complete".
'Cause it's still listed as "Incomplete".
Just thought you might like to know.
Honestly, though, while the story is good, I was rather disappointed in the ending, as I was rather hoping, after reading the two choices that Deathclaw gave Twilight, that she'd take the first, most sensible one, and release her family and friends from her control, and thus let things progress without her pulling strings behind the scenes.
But she didn't, so that's that.
And, disappointed, or not, it is your story, and you have the right to finish it anyway that you want to.
2774266 Yeah, I left it open so that it might get a sequel sometime in the future. Still haven't decided yet and there's some open stuff I got to deal with first.
Thanks for alerting me to the incomplete status by the way, completely slipped my mind.
That's cool.
But maybe you should change the tag on it from "Incomplete" to "Complete".
'Cause it's still listed as "Incomplete".
Just thought you might like to know.
Honestly, though, while the story is good, I was rather disappointed in the ending, as I was rather hoping, after reading the two choices that Deathclaw gave Twilight, that she'd take the first, most sensible one, and release her family and friends from her control, and thus let things progress without her pulling strings behind the scenes.
But she didn't, so that's that.
And, disappointed, or not, it is your story, and you have the right to finish it anyway that you want to.
2774266 Yeah, I left it open so that it might get a sequel sometime in the future. Still haven't decided yet and there's some open stuff I got to deal with first.
Thanks for alerting me to the incomplete status by the way, completely slipped my mind.
2774272 Ah, okay. I didn't know that. Thanks for explaining things.
And you're quite welcome, my friend.