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  • 453 weeks
    An Odd Night

    I should be working on my story. And yet, somehow I find myself in a chat-room hypnotising strangers. I'd never done it before, but apparently it went well...

    I need a new hobby.

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  • 454 weeks
    My Sincerest Apoligies + Snippet

    My god time flies by, one second I'm promising that I'll have a story out next week and the next procrastination hits me with all the speed and subtlety of a bullet train on steroids. I really have to apoligise for that. Anyhow, I am now beginning work on the first chapter and to make up for the lateness, I am providing a snippet of the chapter, which you can find below. As for when I'll have it

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  • 466 weeks
    Twilight Corruption Sequel

    Hello, I am proud to announce that I have begun work on the sequel to The Twilight Corruption. It will be called Twilight's Silent Conquest and I have already ironed out a basic plot. You should be expecting the first chapter next week.

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  • 466 weeks
    Practice and a hint

    Hi, just a quick blog post to say that I'm practicing for a largish project in the future, two hints, it'll contain mind control and is a sequel. As for the practice, it's just a description of a room, but I'll appreciate any feedback.

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  • 470 weeks
    The Penthouse - A short story

    Hi, a quick story written on the Iphone, please, give me feedback in the comments.

    It was a rainy, dull night as Twilight looked over the city, her dark and busy city, stood in front of her window in her luxurious penthouse. A lavish affair of purple leather and lavender walls, it was what you would expect of a business leader such as Twilight.

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Apr
22nd
2015

The Penthouse - A short story · 7:31pm Apr 22nd, 2015

Hi, a quick story written on the Iphone, please, give me feedback in the comments.

It was a rainy, dull night as Twilight looked over the city, her dark and busy city, stood in front of her window in her luxurious penthouse. A lavish affair of purple leather and lavender walls, it was what you would expect of a business leader such as Twilight.

But while usually this scene might be of comfort to Twilight, the beauty and warmth of the room was disturbed by a familiar yet unwelcome presence, the grand Princess Celestia, ruler of Equestria.

"Twilight, you've gone too far. My guards need those weapons and your attempts to withhold them will be dealt with harshly." Warned the solar monarch. Tilting her head slightly, Twilight's only response was silence. After all, Celestia had no true power here, in this bustling city ruled by money, where regulations had been stripped bare and true harmony was merely a rumour.

Instead, Twilight made a mental note to have the weaponry, merely some swords and war hammers, destroyed. Now that Celestia had her eye on them, the joy of seeing her rage-filled face, combined with more than a little bit spite, was worth far more than any profit made from the sale.

And so, Twilight merely waved Celestia away, severing the final thread of friendship and leaving only hate in it's place.

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