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SUBJECTXVI


I blow stuff up 4 fun, enjoy poetry that doesn't annoy me, have recently joined the broney army, love lesbians but hate it when gay guys do their thing in front of me, I'm 18 & out of my phyche ward!

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  • 445 weeks
    Anthem of the Banshee

    I have returned from my long, long, long, loooong. Absence. I was depressed for a while (I'm not anymore my GF and some of my Amazing Friends (Fable Linked and Amanda and Ermis Green to name a few of them) made sure of that. Anyway I wanted to do something special and post one of my "Nicer" Anthems for you guys! I hope you enjoy it! Also Check on Unseeing Eyes sometime this week! If all

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  • 455 weeks
    Good Bye

    Dedicated to Lirianna Emerson: April 9th 1994 to August 14 2015 9:45 PM.

    Good Bye My Sweet Sweet Friend.

    Carry on broken soul. Even as the world weighs you down. Carry on, and continue without a sound. Carry on frail heart. Even as you wish to fall and die.

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  • 455 weeks
    A Letter From An Unperson

    I am the forgotten poet. The destitute soul. The Crowning achievement of Damnation. An empty shell left in the dust to die. Am I destined to fall away and fade from sight? Is this good? Is this right? If it is then why do I feel so hallow and empty inside? Was there something I forgot, forever lost in time? Should I stay? should I fight?

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  • 466 weeks
    Anthem of the Ghosts (Slightly Morbid)

    Hey Ya'll! Sorry I haven't been posting too much! My new job is a real hassle. Even though I don't need said job my GF says I have to be a proactive member of society and Parole shrink agrees. So I'm kinda stuck doing it. T_T Anyway! Here's the next anthem!

    Silence is the sound no one hears. You're heart it pounds with all your fears.

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  • 471 weeks
    Fade

    So guys I'm gonna try something new with this next Poem. And that is? Nothing! I will not be thinking about my feelings or emotions. No nothing. Just my fingers on my keyboard and nothing else... So let's see what it brings us! I hope it's at least some what intelligent.

    A soft word, briefly spoken. A token war, with families broken. A stark tragedy, that leaves me wondering.

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Jan
23rd
2015

Anthem of The Doctor (Morbid) · 9:36am Jan 23rd, 2015

Okay guys! Doin something a little different. I've decided to unleash upon you'll the poems that heralded the rising of some of my Darker Personalities. Sufficed to say watch out cuz this is gonna get bloody. If this one does good i'll release the others and then eventually the lighter ones as well. So if you want those your gonna have to wade through a river of blood. So... Here you go!

It is with a sudden slight epiphany that I stand before you today. Resting in the sunlight after a warm winter rain. Yes indeed a warm winters rain indeed, but now it is time for my patients to bleed.
Doctor! Doctor! They cry! I have something in my eye, I got sick eating a pie, I forgot how to tell time!
Well No more shall I hear your cries! No more shall your sickening sight plague my eyes! I shall bleed you until your dry! Then let us see if you can still complain about your eye! I shall take you by your yellow festering throats and stab you until you can no longer emote! No more will you plague my eyes!
I shall go to the very highest of heights and piss on your corpses where they lie! No more shall you plague my eyes! I have begun my great sacrifice! The sheep they too shall die! For they bleep and moan about society and her woes! No more shall they plague my ears for I shall drown them in they're tears! For I have no fears! I am The Doctor to Satan and his peers! Now you see I have nothing but leers for you and your petty tears!

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Comments ( 4 )

Wow... okay, that was... something. That was a lot darker and gorier than I'm used to reading. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying that I didn't like it. This was just something that I wouldn't normally read. I can see how it could appeal to someone who likes this sort of thing. Sorry that I can't really give more feedback.

2771912 Huh... I Thought That Would Have Been Your Reaction To AotR... But Meh Oh Well.
If You Couldn't Guess Doc Is One Bucked Up Piece of Work. Bad to the Point that We have Put Him In A Steal Box Under Lock and Key... However He Isn't the Worst One... Anyway! My Next Anthem Shall Be My Own. I am Currently the Ruling Personality(I Usually Am, Origin Trusts Me The Most). Origin is Sleeping Currently. I Don't Know For How Long. He's Just Been Really Tired Lately. Any Way My Anthem Shall Be Up Soon If Not Tonight The Probably Tomorrow Night.

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The way that I think is that most things are used to describe something or someone have a... spectrum, is a good word for what I'm trying to say. You had listed both Anthems as morbid, and that is a very good word to use for them, but they are both morbid for different reasons. Doctor is morbid because it has descriptive, gory imagery. That is on one end of the spectrum. Reaper is morbid because the darkness is (I think) emotionally tied. You, yourself even described him as emotional

Reaper is A bitter, angry a lot of the time.

To make what I'm saying a bit clearer, think of them in terms of Horror movies. The Doctor is a slasher film and Reaper is psychological thriller. Both good, but appeal to different audiences. You really can't compare the one against the other to judge quality/merit. It would be like comparing Jason and Hannibal Lecter to see which of them is scarier. What this boils down to is that I had more of a reaction to AotR is because it made me think, that is what appealed to me. AotD was mostly shock value for me. Just blood and guts, but not enough substance to make me think.

2772934 Aw Okay I Get It Now.

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