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SUBJECTXVI


I blow stuff up 4 fun, enjoy poetry that doesn't annoy me, have recently joined the broney army, love lesbians but hate it when gay guys do their thing in front of me, I'm 18 & out of my phyche ward!

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  • 439 weeks
    Anthem of the Banshee

    I have returned from my long, long, long, loooong. Absence. I was depressed for a while (I'm not anymore my GF and some of my Amazing Friends (Fable Linked and Amanda and Ermis Green to name a few of them) made sure of that. Anyway I wanted to do something special and post one of my "Nicer" Anthems for you guys! I hope you enjoy it! Also Check on Unseeing Eyes sometime this week! If all

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  • 449 weeks
    Good Bye

    Dedicated to Lirianna Emerson: April 9th 1994 to August 14 2015 9:45 PM.

    Good Bye My Sweet Sweet Friend.

    Carry on broken soul. Even as the world weighs you down. Carry on, and continue without a sound. Carry on frail heart. Even as you wish to fall and die.

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  • 450 weeks
    A Letter From An Unperson

    I am the forgotten poet. The destitute soul. The Crowning achievement of Damnation. An empty shell left in the dust to die. Am I destined to fall away and fade from sight? Is this good? Is this right? If it is then why do I feel so hallow and empty inside? Was there something I forgot, forever lost in time? Should I stay? should I fight?

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  • 461 weeks
    Anthem of the Ghosts (Slightly Morbid)

    Hey Ya'll! Sorry I haven't been posting too much! My new job is a real hassle. Even though I don't need said job my GF says I have to be a proactive member of society and Parole shrink agrees. So I'm kinda stuck doing it. T_T Anyway! Here's the next anthem!

    Silence is the sound no one hears. You're heart it pounds with all your fears.

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  • 466 weeks
    Fade

    So guys I'm gonna try something new with this next Poem. And that is? Nothing! I will not be thinking about my feelings or emotions. No nothing. Just my fingers on my keyboard and nothing else... So let's see what it brings us! I hope it's at least some what intelligent.

    A soft word, briefly spoken. A token war, with families broken. A stark tragedy, that leaves me wondering.

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Oct
25th
2015

Anthem of the Banshee · 10:08am Oct 25th, 2015

I have returned from my long, long, long, loooong. Absence. I was depressed for a while (I'm not anymore my GF and some of my Amazing Friends (Fable Linked and Amanda and Ermis Green to name a few of them) made sure of that. Anyway I wanted to do something special and post one of my "Nicer" Anthems for you guys! I hope you enjoy it! Also Check on Unseeing Eyes sometime this week! If all goes well there should be a new chapter!

Angels and The Fallen hear my cry. Let the Victims go unanswered, and Justice die.
Let my voice be heard over all distant skies. I shall not be forgotten, I shall not hide.
For I have seen evil, and met it Eye to Eye.
I have seen the Dream, and know it to be a lie.
Let my words be written down line by line. And let it be known for all time.
My birth was a tragedy without reason nor rhyme. A twist of fate, hidden between the lines.
For how does one accept a wish on a star, when there is no sky?
I have seen the Dream and know it to be a lie.
I have heard the Psalms, oh how you lie. For there is no hope under a starless sky.
Let my voice be heard over all distant skies. I shall not be forgotten, I shall not hide.
I will shout my existence, I have seen the lie. I shall speak the truth, before I die.
There is no Dream, and there is no sky. Listen to my truth this truth I Cry.
I have seen the Dream and know it to be a lie.

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Comments ( 2 )

Hey SUBJECT, glad that you are doing better. Anyway, as always, I liked this one. I thought that it was kind of sweet in a melancholy way. I think that you meant the fourth line:

I seen the Dream, and know it to be a lie.

To be the same as the last line. And this one:

There is no Dream, and the is not sky.

Is it suppose to read "There is no Dream, and there is no sky"?
So, one again loved this one as always and can't wait for more.

Your faithful follower,
Hot Charge

3496323 Yeah Lol I already knew about those. I spotted them after but I wasn't home so I could fix them until I got back! :twilightblush::twilightsheepish:

Thanks for the support HC!

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