Fade · 12:30pm Apr 22nd, 2015
So guys I'm gonna try something new with this next Poem. And that is? Nothing! I will not be thinking about my feelings or emotions. No nothing. Just my fingers on my keyboard and nothing else... So let's see what it brings us! I hope it's at least some what intelligent.
A soft word, briefly spoken. A token war, with families broken. A stark tragedy, that leaves me wondering.
Is this madness? Or just life happening?
A broken vow, this heart is bleeding. Careful now, you're life is leaving. Turn around, I'll wait here ever longer. Great the crowds, I'm sure they'll forgive your frown.
For all my folly, I'm not surprised. To find that all I know is lies.
A darkened thought, is this all that's left? A broken soul, Is this my fate? A single blade, can anything take my pain? A solemn tear, down to the bone.
It's cold... But I don't mind...
A lonely soul, I guess it was my time. A broken light, to sleep within the night. A single word, forgotten in the final rights.
Should I care? There's no real reason I can find.
A final word, for those with more time. A single idea, before I'm gone. A single instance, to finally live before I die.
...
Why?
Holy Shit... what just happened? Geez... Okay so maybe I haven't exercised all of my demons yet... Well that's the last time I do that alone. See ya'll later!
Wow. Dude that was fantastic! For some reason, that reminded me of Poe's work, but more modern. Can wait to see more from you.
That was so cool! Dark as always too
3006473 3006764 Thank you both! Though seriously I am NOT doing something like I did for this poem unsupervised again. My mind went to some pretty... Scary places. And I would like the assurance that, we won't get stuck down the rabbit hole.