Edits and Help

Kay.
It's been a while. A long while. I've edited the last chapter in the story, and did my best to weed out any and all mistakes. Point out any extras I may have missed.

Also, I am in need of an editor.
But I would like one with experience, please.
Lest I cannot find one.

I won't update as frequently, because I'm doing my best to get a babysitting job, (ironic avatar, huh?) I have school, friends that are depressed from time to time, other stories, other websites, and the constant task of explaining to kids in my school who think I'm dating someone that I never have, and never will.