• Member Since 3rd Jan, 2014
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OroKinAu


Who am I? A 43 year old history teach living a double life as a brony fanfic writer.

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  • 103 weeks
    BLOG XXV

    It has been a while.

    I have a lot of abandoned drafts I want to work on, so look forward to new updates.

    Also, please look forward to a possible dedicated Discord channel if you want to hang out or talk or something lol.

    Sorry for the absence.

    1 comments · 116 views
  • 381 weeks
    BLOG XXIV

    A new semester has started, and with it, a lot of work. I hope to continue writing and publishing new stories on here, I just don't know when I'll ever find the time to do so.

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  • 416 weeks
    BLOG XXIII

    I'm planning on writing some side-stories to the "Mask One Wears", do you want me to add these stories to the fanfic itself, or just make a new fanfic just for the side-stories? What do you think?

    2 comments · 452 views
  • 420 weeks
    BLOG XXII

    Writing Stories

    What society thinks I do:

    What my friends think I do:

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  • 421 weeks
    BLOG XXI (Wild One)

    Wilderness Mistress....

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Dec
21st
2014

BLOG XVI (Question) · 5:56pm Dec 21st, 2014

What do you think of my fics so far?

Report OroKinAu · 251 views · Story: The Family Mare ·
Comments ( 2 )

I loved it. I wondered though how it was going to finish. Also I say the last few chapters were a bit rush. AppleJack solved her and Rarity's problem without any real conflict. Not what I was expecting. I did love all the detail that went into that story. I also wanted there to be a bit more courtship between AppleJack and Tender when appleJack returned home. I wanted to see how She got Trenderhoof's heart after everything on the train. I would have loved to read about their dates and the proposal. Very great job with that story, I want to see how it progressed a bit more.

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