Changes to the first chapter of "Random Acts Of Chaos" · 4:04pm Dec 13th, 2014
Hello my dear followers,
You might have noticed my new story "Random Acts Of Chaos" and after my friend read the story, he told me that he had found a major flaw; namely the in-dynamic relationship between Rainbow Dash and Gritty Metal. It was like a fist to the face of anyone who believes in realism, so I decided to change the passage at the end of the chapter to not have it contain anything more than the beginning friendship between the two.
I hope that it does not really change anyone's positive reception of the story, but after some arguing this approach to the story just seems more dynamic, realistic and somehow less staged (if that makes any sense whatsoever).
Your sincerely,
Gritty Metal