Story edit and update on the final chapter

So one commenter noted an inconsistency in the first chapter of my story regarding the way Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash react to my character's newly discovered telepathy upon touching them. I have now edited the chapter so that their reactions are more believable. Also for those of you waiting for the final chapter I just want you to know that it is all written up as of about 2 weeks ago. I managed to get the entire chapter knocked out in about 2 1/2 hours tops with the help of an epic playlist and 2 cans of Monster , but, as this is the final chapter, I want to make sure that it ends on a proper note so I'm currently going through a month-month and a half long process of editing and layering to make sure that it's a quality product before release. Anyone who knows me knows that I try my best to make all my projects perfect so that they're not half assed and if that means putting a month or so of editing into it til I'm happy with it I'm more than willing to go the distance (obscure Disney song reference ). I appreciate all of you guys bearing with me as I come along down the home stretch and I hope to have the final chapter out by Hearth's Warming Eve. Anyways I've said enough so I'll see you guys on the final chapter and Happy Thanksgiving.