Oct
23rd
2014
Sequels! · 7:24pm Oct 23rd, 2014
I am growing fond of sequels, which is exactly why one was just submitted (for grading is degrading) and one is in the making (for a day at the spa.)
All my unfinished stories are progressing as well. I have some requests, but I was wondering if people wanted me to do specific stuff. If you do, just comment :D I can't wait to hear what you say!
1. Rumbleoo fic
2.Dash-as-main-character-fic
3.Trixie, Celestia, or Crysalis.
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I'd like to see something with Chrysalis or Celestia from you.
Trixie would be interesting to see too.
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Those all do sound rather interesting to write about, but from those I'll probably do something Trixilicious.
Thanks!!
Your welcome I also read your new Cherilee story.
Your style of writing in that fic is so refreshing as I stated in my review It feels " Clerkish." in the way it was written.
I can kinda get a Dante vibe from Cherilee lol.
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D'aww, thanks!
Kind of just experimenting with a troll idea I got.
But I'm glad you liked it!
I hope you like my future stories and I continue entertaining you
You're welcome you are a very talented writer.
The fact you can write in many styles as well genres is interesting to see.
You did excellent in 1st person though I still think your opening to white room as sorely overlooked ( also thank you for your opinion on my update to it as well means alot that the creator of the idea thought my work was good. )
Then with 3rd person as well as Descriptive, narrative etc writing you pull them all off great., the fact with every new chapter or fic you evolve your writing shows a growth as an author.
Again you have a gift most can only write in one maybe two genres and styles but you found a way to do more.
Keep it up and continue to evolve.
Perhaps one day after the fan-fictions have faded and an idea comes to you in the night.
I'll see a E-Book or maybe even a Book itself written by you.
Thank you for inspiring me to know writing can evolve and become something fresh.
Keeps me wanting to write as well.
2552157
No words right here...
Just...
Thank you. Thank you times a million.
I never knew what I could accomplish, and I'm so shocked that you think all that of me.
I just...
Thank you!!!
Sorry for the double post lol.
Now that I said my piece I'm surprised nopony has yet to give ideas here as of yet, The Trolling type of character as you spoke of above is interesting.
But the troll archtype can be abused for humor far too often though comedy is where it does thrive.
Be carefull not to over-use the type and as you continue to write about such a character flush them out.
Give them aspirations as well as inspirations to give the character a continuous breath of fresh air.
The trollish archtype can continued to be used in various ways.
The way you continue with cherilee can be used as a back character style, but I think you'd use her better as a Front Character of course.
Lol I bet I'm coming off as confusing.
Simply put you have been given alot of positive feedback on your Cherilee stories.
You can continue on as one-shots within the future it's ok to keep with a formula.
But as a few ponies did say if you ever choose to make something else out of Cherilee story wise as a complete story.
Then don't forget to evolve the character, flush her out and of course humanize the pony lol.
No not EG humanize-make her a relatable protagonist so done in your style will make us continue to root for the under-dog in her chaotic life.
I have no idea where or if you will take the character., but decided to just talk about it here.
Great fics always looking forward to more.
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Thanks!!
I love the humanizing idea.
Your Welcome a good character is an evolving character.
Unless just done for a series of one shots then I say keep with the forumla, but if you take her to one day become a character in her own story evolve away.
Take it like.
Sandbox Vs RT-Real Time.
Ex. The Simpsons- Sandbox- Nothing really changes more a less they have a forumla continue to use it and have a fan base.
RT- MLP- Though the switch between using it and not using it lol, they more a less add to the characters as we've seen and show them grow as well as change.
The formula of what makes each character tick and move on changes, not just giving us a re-used story with a fresh coat of paint.
As well they too have a fan base- Eithier can be used and sucessful but also fail if abused.
Keep those ideas ticking is all I can say.
2552232
Thanks for the advice, it really helps
Will do!
Your welcome love seeing what you come up with next.
Hehehe...I keep seeing your fics popping up in the Popular stories list.
I only made it there once and for that Cupcake revision fiasco I did lol.
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XD Thank you!
Yeah, people love me lately
Really, I enjoyed that cupcakes fic. It made me happy and sad, all rolled into one.
Really?
I got thumbs down like no tomorrow and sent a few emails just telling me to please stop etc.
I still have it saved on another site, I might repost it and say
That's right come and get me...
Plus I got a feeling I might have been stepping on some hooves doing a revision I'm going to ask around get some ok's from some high ups that its ok to revision anything, then prob repost.
2552403
Thats awesome!
Can't wait!
LOL, its like, *reposts*
U mad bro?