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Frix


Human, Male, conflicted(obviously)

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  • 467 weeks
    Rewrite in Progress

    I hate to say it, but after much encouragement from my editor(AKA, my brother.) I've begun rewriting the early portions of my story. As it currently stands, expect everything up to Luna's intervention in his mind to be up for reinterpretation.

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  • 498 weeks
    Sorting out my priorities.

    TL:DR down the bottom(No I don't blame you.)

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Oct
7th
2014

Sorting out my priorities. · 4:08am Oct 7th, 2014

TL:DR down the bottom(No I don't blame you.)

Like all first time authors who use ADHD to get places. I just dived off the deep end on my writing, and let me tell you, there were days I put out 6k words. I had 2 chapters completed within the same 24 hour period. Unfortunately, this also meant I made MASSIVE mistakes, bad tenses, wording that just felt wrong when I went back to look at it, heck, I didn't choreograph killing the first swarm queen appropriately(5 foot sword, I'm standing in her larynx AND holding an ear, but I still stab a 5 foot sword down into her face?)

As such, I'm moving to what will hopefully be a steadier, and CLEANER schedule, I'll try to start releasing chapters weekly, on Tuesday to be exact, I've already got one more chapter, and a second that I'm fleshing out a bit more. Should be done by the end of the 7th(I hope, social interaction is HARD) I'm TRYING to assemble an appropriate mental outlook for the rulers of everything(Celestial sisters, duh.), as well as the mane six. Sorry, but until I get into a better groove, I'm keeping the number of individuals involved to a minimum, hence the reintroduction to peaceful society crutch.

I've also, with the help of my brother, started going back through my previous chapters, as such. The ones that say (edited) have been cleaned up ALOT, I would heartily recommend re-reading them if at all possible.

TL:DR
I messed up, trying to fix it.
Updates will now be done weekly.
Stuffs being rewritten, check it out.

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Comments ( 2 )

What is Redemption a crossover of?

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Did I really? I did, I'm sorry. :ajsleepy: It's not really a crossover inasmuch as I draw inspiration from a variety of sources. Whether it be Mad Max's YHaY, or Titanfall and their Pilots(Not the first thing I've encountered them in, but definitely one of the more popular right now.), or simply stories depicted in songs that I decide I want to write a possible enactment of.(See Heirs of empire, I'll be basing some of my later story off certain aspects of that story as well.)

I've yanked said crossover tag, silly me. :facehoof:

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