Rewrite in Progress · 3:21pm May 15th, 2015
I hate to say it, but after much encouragement from my editor(AKA, my brother.) I've begun rewriting the early portions of my story. As it currently stands, expect everything up to Luna's intervention in his mind to be up for reinterpretation.
I'm addressing a multitude of issues ranging from the fact he's entirely too open with ponies at first, to the fact that Redemit was taking the lead rather than Vine, to the fact that he was schizo enough. (My editor hates the fact that I'm pulling a number of the jokes I made out, so am I, but I'm also fleshing the story out rather than just leaving it as bare boned as it was.)